The story and the content seems to be Apoealing.Looking forward for the upcomings...I hope this would be a big hit and also I would not forget to mention your effort .overall fantastic??
Okayy this story is great! I love how you interduced us in the first chapter between the bond of MC and his bestie.Something that makes story even better is that the story is well-written as a POV and its in my fav genre!Hope you'll post more chapters soon!
Like this novel, see it in potential starlet good job author
I dont know? I mean everyones review is so good so list this to my library but i just read two chap mostly intro about MC and the system. Although the review said the two chap is funny i didnt find it? Must re-read again i think.
When i saw the cover ,I honestly thought this will be a cheaper version of The beginning after the end. But damn was i wrong. Although it is very similar to it at the beginning, it starts to become completely different after the adventurer years arc.
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Nice book got me really intrigued And immersed Great character Development and amazing Plot I wouldn’t Be shocked if u become famous for this Great job
I’m on chapter 52 and I’ll tell you author; I love your novel so far, everything is so smooth, and the way the MC and FL carry themselves is just perfect. I just hope that there is not much time separation between them where one leaves and comes back like 100 years later. Overall, I love it.
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I love this story it’s so good I wish it would update I miss it it’s just what I’m looking for in a story everything including the BL yes bl I love this story please continue to write it please
I have read 15 chapters so far and it looks good and unique. There some minor spelling mistake but overal looks promising.
REVIEWNarration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyMESSAGENow, this is an amazing work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work!ADVICENone, the author was a better writer compared to me! Haha.