The story is good and so is the concept. The intro is catching, it makes you want to know what will happen to the poor blind Micah. The world background is perfect, it keeps me imagining how it looks like. Good job author
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This is actually a very interesting novel so far and got me hooked . Grammar is a little bad but still understandable so it's alright for now. Seems good until now and I hope it grows into another big thing because this seriously have a lot of potential. And I am not very good with English either so... yeah it's all good in my eyes . Keep it up author.
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After clocking over three hundred chapters, I will be giving my novel a Review.
Firstly, I would like to say that while I am the author, my opinions on this book isn’t just based on bias.
It’s a wonderful and interesting story.
I have received a few criticisms, of which I will be addressing here.
As readers, you should also be prepared to see these factors. So that you’re not caught off guard, let me explain a few things.
[Sp0iler Alert]
*Some things mentioned may contain mild sp0ilers*
Firstly;
The MC acts like a kid even though he’s supposed to be an old sage internally.
Secondly;
The Academy Arc makes no sense because of how Mc is treated despite being of nobility
Thirdly;
Cliche routes like Demons and Academy being implemented
Fourthly;
The reasons behind some of Mc’s seemingly risky/immature actions
Lastly;
The story’s progression
To answer those major criticisms, I have made this Review.
Answer 1:
If you’ve ever watched Black Clover, or some similar Anime, you tend to notice some old personalities who act immature at times.
An example is Julius Novachrono.
Thanks to his love of Magic, and his goofy personality, he acts like a child sometimes. However, no one can deny how epic he is when he needs to be.
That’s exactly the same as the MC. If you’re patient enough and just accept this aspect of him, you’ll love his character more
He’s meant to be more relatable and expressive. Don’t expect an ‘Ayanokoji’ for the MC
He behaves childish sometimes, but he really isn’t. Those who have gone further in the story (especially the third arc) can testify to this.
Answer 2:
Ainzlark Academy is purely meritocratic
Even the Prince of the Kingdom attends, and the only reason he’s regarded well is because of his talent for Magic.
The MC’s path to success isn’t known by anyone, so they would naturally ostracize him by their standards
But, it isn’t permanent, so please… don’t get too annoyed.
Answer 3:
This novel may seem cliche from the start, but it’s nothing like that at all.
Some argue that the Academy was unnecessary, but that’s a lie.
If you read the story well, you’ll understand why I went down that route.
As for Demons, it’s not as simple as many works have depicted their existence. Again, you need to read the story to find out.
Answer 4:
The MC is very smart.
If you’ve reached the third arc, you’ll understand this perfectly well.
Even from the first arc, you begin to see traces of his intelligence.
Not just Magic, but strategy and knowledge in other fields.
But, some of his actions may seem a little off. Please do not impulsively judge
Many people dropped the book at first arc because they were too stuck up with their belief of the MC
Unknown to many, in the third arc, the MC explains the rationale behind his seemingly rash action.
Everything the MC does has a reason. I don’t mean he’s perfect and he’s always right. But… he’s not stupid.
Answer 5:
At some point, I changed the POV. Criticisms appeared because I didn’t focus on the MC for some chapters.
But, please understand that he’s not the only important person in the story.
Other important characters will be introduced.
I certainly hope you enjoy this story.
Cheers
Garbage, the author baits you into reading by telling you about the rewards the mc is getting but then pulls this extemely overused, cliche and disgusting "t-the mc can't use these rewards, his foundation can't take it! p-please t-think about his foundation!" plot and makes the mc a generic "slow cultivator who can fight people across realms
Extremely Enjoyable and Entertaining.I really like the whole concept of Measurements and Author It's using It's potential to a satisfactory degree.I won't spoil anything but here is a general review:Writing Quality: Really good, Of course this is for a novel in this app but even then I haven't seen a Grammer mistake (low english knowledge as it is my second language).I believe Writing is one of the strongest aspect of this Novel.Story Development: Really good as well.I like the pacing and how the story is progressing, It seems that Author is aware of where he is going with the plot.Character Design: I like this one, I can't give a professional review about this aspect of the story but I, myself really like it.The MC is 3 dimensional and other characters have personality as well.I like that MC isn't the only one with a Past veiled in mystery.Updating Stability: Kinda slow, wish it was faster, but Author hasn't gone back on his word of giving 3 to 4 chapters a week.Still writing Quality can make you overlook the slow updates.World Background: Not sure what to say about this, In one aspect, they are various organisations and cities that have been named and play a important part in the story that I like and I think are cool, In another aspect I still think it could be worked on better because I sometimes get confused when a City is being talked about.The Organisation Are Cool tho, I like them.All in all, Great novel, Sad that this is getting slept on.Better than 99.9 % of stories here.
I’m not sure how this novel is going to turn out but I feel translator is trash
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I'll start off with my one flaw, currently the flow of grammar isn't that fluent, which made me struggle, though I feel some editing can change that. Aside that, the story has a wonderful take on the demon trope and the plot is fast paced. The name Thorkell is such a befitting one for the demon lord's host and a lot of effort was put into the world background.Overall the story is truly enjoyable and I can't wait for me
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