"Captivating from start to finish, the novel seamlessly weaves intricate plots and rich character development. The author's vivid storytelling and nuanced exploration of themes create an immersive experience. With a rating of 4.8 out of 5, it stands as a testament to its engaging narrative and thought-provoking depth. Highly recommended for those seeking a compelling literary journey
my big gripe with the story is that it feels like a series of notes, or like you're watching a movie and it's just characters standing in a room while the narrator tells you what *would* be happening if it was a movie. there's a big rule of "show don't tell" in fiction and it's usually to avoid situations like this, it feels very "heavy" on the mind to just read chapter after chapter of expository paragraphs about a bunch of background information especially when it doesn't mean anything to us yet. we were introduced to a family of dragons, their names, histories, size, powers, relationship dynamics etc then they just got thrown away because "no this new guy is the mc". we got introduced to a void in space with these realm trees, spread out across the sky and glowing, a big empty space as the location for the novel, then it got deleted because "no actually were going over here to this heaven place instead". then we had to go through the whole process of exposition dumps for the people who mattered again, it feels like a burger wrapped in 4 layers of packaging, inside a sealed bag, placed in a locked chest, hidden in a wardrobe. even if it's our favourite thing ever the price is too high. you have to study and study chapters and chapters of homework just to get into this novel and I genuinely had to put my tablet down a few times to give myself time to relax from it all.
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the story is good but why do it take so long for the next ch I waited a year and only 10 ch came out if u want to take my money I need more to read if not I'm judt going to find something else to unlock
The story is pretty good and the plot is kind interesting. .........................................................................................,......
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Do you believe in Vampires? Do you know what Krasue is? In Thailand Vampires are rare, Krasue are everywhere. Is Philippa a Vampire or Krasue? Better read to find out.
As an author, I think I'm doing a good job. So without any shame (who knows me here anyway ?), Five stars to the novel! Author is lazy though
Hey, It's the author here, shameless review, I know, in reality I probably would have about a 4-3.5 in the grammar part but I know that this story will be a page turner in the future, so I hope your ready for the journey of the two brothers.
A frustratingly bad novel, steer clear of this. I can't be bothered to write too much about this so my descriptions are going to be very short but just trust me, this novel is rubbish. The prison is dumb. The sects are dumb. The plot is really dumb. This whole novel is just a poorly written mess and even if I did want to give more specific criticism I wouldn't know where to start because it's just that dumb. The ability was passable but that doesn't matter when everything else is trash.A frustrating mess without a shred of originality, how this is popular in China boggles my mind. I'm now certain that those guys have lower standards than the average webnovel user and that's no small feat. I'm giving this the score it deserves because this novel wasn't just not enjoyable but actually really annoying to read. 0/5
This even if I don't want to, my subconsciously compared it to another masterpiece...But even then this is a good novel...though there's some development necessary which will come with time...so with little chapters now...I can say is this goes as I hope then this will be a super awesome novel...Thanks author ...keep it up...make it another masterpiece...
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