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Why is that something to take in consideration about?
The novel was actually quite interesting at first but all of a sudden it just turn to bulshit like how is it even possible for a half fairy defeat an all Creation......like that's just too OP, according to the novel after a half fairy, you have a fairy then we have a divine master then an all Creation ream like the guy literally skipped two whole ream like tf man it just like saying a 1year old can beat a 3years oldAnd besides all that the use of treasure is too much it more like he is not powerful at all, more like he relies on the treasureWell I appreciate the author ☺️, 'cause at the beginning of the novel the novel got me really excited, like I was always looking forward to the next chapter but now it is all bulshit, like the novel is unrealistic, just stupidYeah, one more thing the author of the novel is really stupid and I'm not sorry to say it, the mf just got me up for nothing, now I will have to spend another 3-7 days to search for a new novel, what a waste of time
The is no paragraphs since 420 so I will stop reading it.
Extremely bad transition I am having a hard time keeping up with the story
Thank you for updating
Umm this novel is not complete some of the smut scenes are missing and its already completed on the internet
I don’t understand how she likes someone but allow people to feel she’s not worth the man
Characters are fun and the story in engaging
this story is full of word count like when i was so and so i would've done this and that repeated 10 times a chapter u could skip entire paragraph and chapter without missing anything important and his supposed to be older than he looks but act like a baby and fall for the most obvious scheme overall not worth it
i understand that it is hard for you to comment because of this Erotic novel but atleast till me something if the story is good to read or bad, i can not give answers to my self it depends on you readers so its on you to decide.
stolen story, really sad that modération doesn't do anything about it
Really? Right in front of my pancit canton? I approve of this novel as the pancit canton guy. That's it for my review, have a great day, adios~
