[★★★★★] 5 Star for noharem ✨
This is an amazing book. Word count below, don't read it.We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking ofYou wouldn't get this from any other guyI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say itInside, we both know what's been going onWe know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt you(Ooh, give you up) (Ooh, give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it Inside, we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play itI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you upNever gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
Great book so far, the prologue was a bit dark but it fitted really wel in the story and it explained a lot about the actions of the protagonist. Some part of the story took a bit of inspration of other books but you did it in a way that it fits in your story and not just copy pasted it and that was well done. I look forward to the direction that will take this book in. The only sad part is dat I couldn’t read it completely in the 24 hours that is was free.
this novel clearly has potential! the writing style, the characters, the world building, the pacing, especially the plot. it's all executed very nicely! i see a top author in the making. keep writing, dear author!(also luken can step on my face and i'd still thank him)
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This should be called "Journey to become a true Translator" Or something along those lines. I read machine translated stuff all the time so me being bored and having enough time on my hands i gave this a read. I found a lot of this stuff to be extremely funny, so if you read it while thinking this isn't a serious novel then it's actually hilarious...But on that note plot is pretty much one bunch of cliches smashed together, i mean it's not bad to be honest but if you're not looking for this type of story then it definitely won't appeal to you.My views on novels on this site is pretty simple, give me an OP MC and a some Romance (doesn't need to be harem) and R-18 tag and ill give it a go.That being said for those of you who are reading this story i tip my imaginary fedora off to you...and if you spent to unlock any chapter on this then let me know where i can send my bank accounts routing information to so you can send me your money since you don't need it.
writing quality - quite good for a novel on this site.stability of updates - very frequent story development - the only thing done is mostly grinding for the most part (read up to chapter 26). the level up frequency is so fast that barely anything is explored at all. it just ends up as a 1) go here, 2) kill mob , 3) level up. repeat. if i could give this section a 0 i would give it a zero.character design -up until chapter 26 character interactions are quite minimal and short given it has been mostly grinding or orders given, thus making every character seem 1 dimensional. 2 stars total. extra star for the mafia background which is different from what you normally see.world background - suffers from same reason as story development. nothing touched upon. all we know is that mc went here got legend class, went there and trained. went there to dungeon, go there to train. no point in remembering places since mc will just speed past it soon enough. its a story wiith a good premise but pacing is obviously an issue. level ups have gone by so fast that mc is past level 100 in 26 chapters and this spans only a few days since game release. perhaps it got better in the future, i wouldn't know because i am dropping this novel here. without story development or world background in terms of quests, the game is very flat and does not engage my imagination of different scenes. given that this game should span years, the fast paced leveling is broken and i dread what kind of levels will make sense years down the timeline. If you can stomache the issues or dont mind it, feel free to continue reading. i applaud you for i couldnt bear it.
I haven't spot any flaw or maybe i just miss it...ah there are some but it okay pass it and the story begin to be interesting ... This is story about mc transmigrated to world of summoning but the world already meet its end... Human about to lose so they live like dog... Sumoner lose their ability because some kind of barrier lock the spirit world or somethingThe mc can summon human from earth and gain strength from them when they growth....hmmmm....oh they can awaken some kind of superpower... I'm sorry if it hard to read but if you understand please give it a try...
Alright this novel is a horrible video game novel. Lucky drops galore alongside incomprehensible game mechanics. If you can ignore the fact that it's a game novel then you might get some sliver of enjoyment out of it as long as you don't think too deeply. All in all, it's not worth more than 3 stars, and I'm being generous.
Why, you may ask? Because its the only fanfiction of RSSG compared to other story that are dropped, and it is a transmigration one, especially on the main character, :D (Hopefully there would be more) which i like, pls moar chaptah author. Anyways it's pretty good so far, i expect him, the main character to have more potential almost like a mutated monster, (in the story he at least gets a potion from the system that upgrades his body talent to mutated or close to mutated monster. Good luck man :) and be safe. ?
Amazing book, I was originally skeptical about reading it because it had no reviews, but my goodness I’ve found a hidden gem. It is totally WORTH A READ! the writing and grammar is perfect and the story is really interesting, furthermore the characters have great depth and relatability. Thank you author and I hope this book gets all the support it deserves because it deserves a lot. Btw I would suggest re-writing the synopsis because it doesn’t do your book justice! =) ty for the novel