The author and logic are like water and oil 1. Where did MC get shorts? 2. Where did MC get googles? 3. why can the girl get a point of vitality from casual relaxed swimming? 4. How on earth can a social person and an expert in prno don't recognize a bra?And this is only beginning.
the name of the novel should be change to My system allows me to copy Skills after all talent do not have cooldown should be a passive thing with a system like that the novel would be a lot better without it
Great hero story, highly recommend. Much more content than expected at a glance. Character development, world building, style and grammar are all on point. Only criticism I have is also a compliment, the story is fully fleshed out. Time passing is explored in depth, but without becoming tedious to read through. Fell like I should go more in depth her but I'm exhausted after binging for the past couple days, good night!
Writing quality is amazing and though he will never correct anything he generally won't have to.Story Development is okay. Certain things I question (Ashly being one of them.) While others are quite well done (Emma and sky.)Character design. Lemme just say. Ashly makes me want to have her grow some balls so I can put them under a hydraulic press. Everyone else is well done. Although mc can feel a little bland sometimes. The actual designs are cool such as water hair in the newer chps.Updates come pretty fast. This might be my last post here if I can't keep up.World is still in need of building. But it feels a little bland and mundane. Nothing super new here.Overall a good novel. World building is a bit weak but the characters are compelling. **** Ashly though.
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There isn't a single trial book worth the read (╥﹏╥) Is there any book you can recommend?
The novel is only so-so. There are flaws with logic and overall there's no depth. Just gain a system and become cocky overnight. He was so desperate before obtaining it... and is still stupid after obtaining it.
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Translator has finally released more chapters i've waited more than 2 years for this
Can anyone tell me the age of the mc at the start of the novel?Depending on the age I might leave this.I'm going to leave for now and wait for more chapters but the first chapter seemed weird. The mc acts like a child yet it also seems to imply he is at least 16, of course my observation might just be ludicrous and he is in fact a child. If he wasn't then I might be a bit disturbed but will continue in the future to see what happens to him.
The beginning is quite captivating. The story develops at a steady pace while not lowering it's quality, with the only problem being grammar but just some minor mistakes here and there. The character descriptions are basic and simple though, but doesn't ruin the story and is enough to still let you imagine the character. World building is, as usual, what you would expect of a fantasy story which can be a good thing.All in all, a great read to say the least.Keep up the good work!
It's good. There are some places it could be better and then there are the normal tropes, ex. betrayal, backstabbing, young master like behaviour, face slapping. so good old webnovels.