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I see potential here and hope that it keeps it up. story isn't mind blowingly unique but is more like a fresh breeze after a long period of stagnant air. No system at least as of yet but just good old slow story progress and thas coming from someone who likes systems.
According to MTL this novels been dropped at chapter 180wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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Pretty good so far, the writing quality is good. The fast-pace doesn't feel rushed, rather it's effective.It's a little bit rough, but like author said, he just upload it and plans on editing it afterward.The only thing that'd bug me so far would be the world background, but I guess since it's only the beginning, all of that will be further developed in the future.The story's quite intriguing, too.The story has potential--I mean, i'm no expert, that's for sure, but from what I see, it has potential to grow well if author keeps it up.Good job.
please continue upadate story weekly and chapter about hero power up in real world.??????????????????????????????
It's trash.238233383823238490239408258947234757329484312837329481354829363729367282348291342842342193342813238174
haha this was the best novel I can wait and read me self into its fun it has good story line and many good characters especially scrappy nice boot
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
an excellent concept with a non human MC in a MMORPG but it's painful to read. very very painful, with your average Chinese plot of girl snatching, poor origins and bullying by rich. it's painful to read
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author! Is the MC married to the girls? .................................................................................................................
It feels like the author took the good parts of every mediocre novel and mashed it together ....not that I'm complaining though . The story is very interesting and protagonist is the correct amount of OP
