Name: Logan (David Smith)
I glared at him. "Well of course! Before they walked away I politely asked them what their names were and they politely answered!
The unicorn tossed its mane into the air and replied, "And what is so wrong with that?"
"Did she have a friend between those homeless brats always running around?" Pò asked with narrowed eyes.
The teeth around his shoulder twitched and Harriett just stared slack-jawed at his words.
This isn't a baseball game!!
Read what was free. Story progressed at a steady pace with ok character development but with so many new people added so quickly it’s hard to flesh them all out personality wise and to gain any attachment to them. Grammar is ok but the story switch POV and also from 1st to 3rd person mid chapter is confusing. I don’t normally go for stories with so many other povs especially all the time like this story. The world building can be expanded on more especially geographically as they travel through the forest. The buildings and villages also aren’t fleshed out well. How many houses are there where are key features in relation to each other etc. MC is ok so far not a hero but not a villain just a normal guy so far. His ability isn’t very unique though but the sharing of abilities is a nice twist at least. Wish you luck
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I really like the the story, reading this novel makes it obvious that the writer is a christian, and I really love the way he has with his words. The writing as nice and describes the story very well. Summary: Just read the story You'll love it
Basically what would happen to Germany if Adolf didn't rise to power after Weimar thus preventing several atrocities.
Story is interesting but somtimes story pace is either very fast or slow, sometimes seems bit repetitive and there could be more character development as there is no interaction with student in 2&3 year in academy but dozens of time MC lost in self monolog and he only trains but still interesting and give it a try and update are delayed in past two months
Warning: Story has a long filler or something starting chapter 238. I don’t know at what chapter the story goes back to the main storyline- I am wary of putting more money into it to find out. I read ten chapters of filler and stopped. Review for the main storyline: It is written at a cut above the standard LN we see here. The cliches are done in a different enough way to be interesting. The main aspect of this story is the near irredeemable MC (The author gives fair warning what the reader is walking into). The MC shows reactions that are totally different than the cliche isekai MCs usually in these stories- some of his reactions are very understandable. But most of the time you want the mc to receive a beating. Regardless the situation the mc gets transmigrated into is complex and makes one want to find out more. I enjoyed it but this is definitely a story where your mileage may vary in how much you can tolerate the MC.