watched realization run through her eyes. He was going to burn her to a crisp.
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Amazing plot!!!!! Really liked the character interactions and how their overall development as well as the picturesque setting. Must read!! 10/10
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
Notice that as this is my first book you may find some errors which I try to fix. the plot may not be the best yet but I sure promise to keep improving to your likings. expect two to three chapters update everyday. if you have any question i will reply to any and if you report an error i will fix it. thanks
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It's good at first, then it's become repetitive, repeating the same plot over and over, and side characters all become dumb; they can't even understand a situation. Mc is the only one with a brain, but again, his character should be a gangstar, but about 100 chapters later, he became an introverted teenager.
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Hello, Author here you might already notice I rated myself pretty poorly for writing quality and updates for the chapters. This is because I still am a high school student. Obviously, my grammar will not be top-notch. I will try my best to fix these errors, however, there is a limit to how well I will do. I'm working on getting an editor so hopefully the writing quality will improve, but for now, if you hate grammar mistakes then I don't recommend you read this story. And of course, during the school year, my chapters rate might be pretty inconsistent. Oh, and those of you worried that I might include some weird teenage fantasies don't worry I will keep that in check (;
The way in which You portrayed the mc an otaku boy is greatly unique. So far I'm loving this story sooo much. Can't say anything about the Ml tho it's only 3 chps. Eagerly waiting for the story to progress
It's a great story, this Meralman has done a great job ?:The main character is very humanThere is very good humorThe fighting is very detailed and uniqueThe chapters are longThe author takes time for the story to develop at a logical paceYes... I'm the autor
I like the way you write it. By the wayy, i like the part where Sage solved the riddles. Kind of tricky to me but how good that Sage solved them easily. Keep writing :)