Wait hold up, Isnt this the same thing as the Tribe online from the last trial read? I swear the trial reads are just degrading to the point of no return (not like thats news to anyone). Ill keep the 5-star review if this novel aint a copy paste of the Tribe online and is fun and orginal with just a similar synopsis.
Please pick it, this is one of the best synopses(idk if thats a word) that i have ever read.
I hope his mom wont die if that happen it will be a path vengeance i dont like that......... And this 140 word thingy i hope they change this as well....
pretty good novel, harem buildup is pretty good till ch 280~ Mc is b3coming stronger relatively faster then others if u think as, all the girls around him have been training since they were children. Main revenge as a whole is still a long ways. But it is going there. Hopefully he goes through with it. Rarely any novel ever does that. it be a nice change in reincarnation hero story.I would recommend everyone who likes harem and characters with actual personality who grow, this is a good one.
De he/she just say God Of War?! With a Super?! So basically you're telling me that its Super Kratos?! Kratos 2.0?! More overpowered Kratos?!My real question is:Is BOY included?!
Readable - Funny - Fun - Jokes - Nice - Curious - Messing - ProblematicIt's everything at the same time. Another quality work from Zhen again, this time, it went from Luck to Primordial and then something entirely else. I can't brain which father can hold himself if he hears the word "Just divorce already" from his own brat.I'm at Chapter 7 already, and yes, it's funny. Writing is good, the story, background, and character are finely made. Although I would prefer if the author used something like mei-mei, tian-tian, and Hua-Hua, and chu-chu, to make sense of the baby names. (as it would sound much better in an eastern fantasy)If you guys are looking at this review and curious, then stop reading what I'm writing and go read the book already. Unless you wanna come and support mine too? Feel free to do so if you do.Keep up the good work Zhenny, it's so far your most interesting book. The content is even better than what I was expecting from your previous works.
Obligatory self-review from the author! Giving myself such a low number, just to make the rest of the score seem more realistic :D Will change that once genuine reviews will start appearing here.For the story:If you are naive kid, then you shouldn't read books involving ***** themes like smut, gore or psychological warfare. As such, begone. I already turned too many people on the bad path with my other novels. Warnings:There will be smut in this novel. Not just mindless **** that you can google and get with sound and video attached, but a smut that will be caused by the story and that will serve the story.At times, there are time-jumps between chapters. Unless the story is directly continued as if there was no chapter-split at all, then suddenly a random part of the story appearing is the result of the time-skip.This novel is the absolute pinaccle of what I can write right now. While the chapters in general will be mostly lighthearted, the same cannot be said about the true plot of the story.Thanks for supporting me and I hope you will like this novel at least as much as I love to write it!(For curious, yeah. This is an indirect continuation of the other "While others cultivate,..." of mine)
This novel keeps coming back to one devastating idea: the apocalypse doesn't make people evil, it removes the consequences that kept their evil in check. Xu Gang thought he was entitled to those girls because they were weak. The second-in-command lied because lies are cheaper than accountability. Jiang Jiming kills because no one can stop him. But then there's Wen Chi—and she's the interesting one because she's trying to hold onto something. She feeds the little girl she sees digging through trash cans. She instructs zombies to leave food for the survivors. She's not a saint ('I am not a saint,' she literally says), but she refuses to become a monster. The locked shelf where Jiang Jiming stores her gifts is a symbol I can't stop thinking about—it's love as hoarding, care as control. And the milk he keeps drugging her with? That's the ultimate symbol of this relationship: he thinks he's protecting her by keeping her docile, but he's actually making her dependent. The recurring image of doors is everywhere too—locked doors, forced-open doors, the door between safety and danger. Wen Chi decides to leave tonight. The door she won't lock tomorrow morning? That's her making a choice.
Rating is subject to change, I've rated SoU and CD at 5, SoU updated daily so no need to say more, CD each Character seem to have their own voice/purpose and this still being early on in the story makes it rating earned. Writing quality takes a ding for quite a few mistakes that broke my immersion, some were enough for me to post in the discord. SD somethings seem slow but this is perhaps an issue with it being the start of the story and less with the pace and the same might be true with WB. Many things can be inferred but we'll see what happens in the next 100 chapters.
Why are they no more chapter released since last week? The story was advancing pretty well. Hope that the release will restart soon.Otherwise this is one of the best novel in qidian and sad to see that he is not rank higher.
The first novel i ever readed, that brought me better understanding in the true essence of "life" and the various principles that commands "life".Er Gen, definitly reached a lot of ephitany on the "mastery of the mind" and it is reflected in this story.Thank you Mr Author, thank you Mr/s Translator, thank you Mr/s Editor.Why do we read? Do we read for reading? Why do we eat? Do we eat to eat?......This novel is the only must read i would ever recommand in your pursuit of mastery of your highter self, it brings perspective that you can't find anywhere else.The Universe is amazing.
This is the first time i will be reviewing a novel. I may not be the best but i will offer my most accurate opinions as best as i can. A Painting of the Nine Immortals, straight into just entering the novel, you have a maincharacter have everything he would need drop in front of him to easily grab. Op abilitys, amazing talent. It all happens 5 chapters in to the novel. As you progress on you just see more luck and "fate" coming into our maincharacters life. This kind of story has its pros and cons and i will try to emphasize A Painting of the Nine Immortals pros and cons. Pros of this type of setting. If the author is not your generic trash and can think up of a creative setting, in depth characters, it can become a interesting read. ConsIf the author is your average generic type of trash who just repeats himself with the same fighting style, same setting(Friends/clan of mc about to be defeated, last moment mc pops up and saves everyone) or just pure repitition of events throughout the novel(hero saves beuty wins her heart). Then the novel can end up average or complete garbage. Since i have read only 88 chapters so far. I can only offer a slight opinion on this. Reading up to chapter 88 this novel already contains a hectic amount of problems, with which i have fought to read on with. Translation Quality- Confusing, clusterred and erratic. First off i know the author tried to make a "unique" cultivation system as such as instead of starting of at realm 1 you actually start at realm 10 in alchemy, cultivation and beast ranks, but as time goes on it just gets really confusing especially when ranks go 1-9(10) being a rank only geniuses can reach.1. While reading the translator uses the word Realm in the place of Rank when it is supposed to be the opposite. Or switching between the terms qi, mana, and reiki constantly, which makes me confused and frustrated at the quality of the translation. 2. Not sure if someone is proof reading these chapters before posting them because while reading i find that lots of words are missing/out of place throughout the novel. Which has not improved from chapter 1-88 so far. Updating Stability- Can only be considered "fair".Story delelopment- The story so far in my opinion is going a a good pace. As of now going from Rank 1 of the Qi Realm to Rank 10 of the qi Realm, has took 88 chapters. In my opinion these beggining ranks should never drag on for a long time unless the author is skilled in keeping the reader from losing interest. Character Design- One word i can use to describe our main character and side characters so far. Shallow. Reading up to chapter 88 you find out that the mc is simply average, determined, youth aiming to become a top cultivator. Nothing complex just pure ******. Our side characters can be considered ****** as well. Chapter 5 or 6(i dont remember the exact chapter) Our mc saves a beauty. Yes i praise the mc for trying not to get envolved with the conflict until hes forcefully dragged into it even when seeing her beauty, but once the mc saves her, she falls in love with him. Just like that. One girl is already head over heals for our mc. This does not happens just once. It happens quite a few times. Enemys? They are just one dimensional arrogant pricks so far, so nothing special. World Background- Shallow very Shallow. Our Mc resides in a small city in the Qin Dynasty. Once our mc unlocked his potential and became Op, apparently he became a talent rarely seen in thousands of years throughout the world. No explanation on how big the mcs world is, no apparent size of the Qin Dynasty as well. So we have no clue on how big the world is as well as how much talent our mc trully has. My own Opinion- Now aside from the technical side of things as i like to call it.(World Background, Translation quality etc. I would like to give ky emotinal view of this book as well.In my own true straight forward opinion. This book is just "average". The mcs personality suits my own tastes as well as the setting the author gave. But reading this i just feel like this book is to just kill time. It can barely keep my interests alive. I hope this review would be somewhat helpful to future considering readers. And i hope i can receive cirticism on what i can improve and not improve for my future reviews. Thank you fellow Daoists. Martial Sovereign out.