This is the product of if you attempt to get me to put in writing an essay with a minimum word count, I go ahead and get a thesaurus from which I then purposefully handpick whichever words would further elongate my statement.
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Waste of time. The author probably don't know what his next chapter would be. Like all other Chinese novel, he was bullied, he was neglected, doesn't know he was the boss, ... Blah blah.. Don't waste your time, pick a real novel.
Grammar and word choice is meh, much room for improvement. There are also some redundant words here and there. Not many descriptive words, some even repeat often. Other than that, it's pretty interesting.
A rare gem on this site. It reminds me a bit of Terror Infinity and that is a rare feeling to have these days. Anyone who enjoys the horror or survival genre should come on down and give it a chance to read!
I just started reading this and listening to it at work and I have to say I'm loving it. The ancient feud, the mystic beast and world everything is fun to read, I can't wait to see him topple this family and all they have built. ? I wonder if the final level of a mystic beast would be a humanoid form would be interesting, I love that this has a bit of beast taming in it, I hope to see more beast added so far it is a spider and a weasel yokai, I saw later he gets a humanoid follower, I hope to see some other yokai beast added maybe a kitsune ?, a mizuchi, a nekomata, a byakko, a Phoenix, a dragonhumanoid someone with oni bloodline, a tengu bloodline, someone with nurarihyon bloodline ?. Got to cover the basics ?, just throwing ideas but whatever is come I'm sure it will be awesome
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everything is forced literally everything
I would like to have given this story a better rating but the author writes something that could be really fun and very enjoyable and instead it turns out to feel really, really drawn and dragged out. Don't get me wrong it has some solid moments. But those moments are vastly drowned out and over shadowed by things being drawn out. For example: There is a chapter that consists basically of just asking how a couple people slept that night.I can handle things being slow paced but only if it feels natural in the writing. In this case it just feels like things are being intentionally dragged along. That said I will probably continue reading every now and then but it most certainly wouldn't be something I'd recommend to others.
A good novel the author did an excellent job
This is probably one of my favorite books. I have searched along time for stories that span for long periods of time and this just makes me want to read and read. Awesome work!
Great book with great potential Good English grammars, didn't waste my time reading all chaps, waiting for more chapters.
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