EvilLord04
Its about what you would expect from an unnecessary system and unnecessary transmigration novel. You have the typical staples, idiot young masters, disrespectful servants, braindead MC who makes things harder for himself, arbitrary restrictions purely to drag out the story. All in all it is not a good novel.
Keep On Writing. This is one of the few I read and I loved your writing style and character development. Your way of writing about characters is good. And the scenes description too
This could be improved especially on the grammar, world building and character end but I'm willing to give the author 5 stars to support his/her work.
interesting storyline makes this book fun to follow. im so excited with this book. this book is literally good and very easy to understand, can't wait to continue reading this book
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I wish to slam my head into a wall after reading this amazingly perfect piece of trash, it has more holes than a sponge and more idiocy and hypocrisy as well as entitlement than anything else ive seen in all my nine lives
what's up with you people rating it 5 stars when you don't even explain the reason why you like it? For me it was a total disappointment, it was okay at first but suddenly things just get distorted, mixed up and messy. btw i hate the way the author keeps pinpointing the carrot, I mean things are already getting messy and yet he's still forcing the carrot line to be inserted.
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I read this about 1 year ago and I must day Im disappointed. Not because the novel is bad, no. In fact I would say its amazing for the novels on webnovel. What Im disappointed in are the insane grammar and spelling errors in the novel. If they were to be fixed, I would read this regularly. The novel also has some odd things with techniques. I still dont fully understand the cloning technique, even after reading 150ish chapters. Having an auxilary chapter to explain techniques like this would be useful, because I had to wonder what he could do and couldnt without any answers. Finally, cliches. The novel has MANY. But, they arent in your face telling you how cool it is to be supreme etc. Its mainly for plot and story, so the MC, the main focus of the story, doesnt suffer from the usual bs that comes with all the cliches. It has potential to be amazing, but holds itself back due to its details.
If you're looking for a gripping martial arts rebirth story with a female MC then you may need to pass over this one as nothing in it was developed to make a coherent story. The entire novel felt more like an outline with characters and plot that weren't properly fleshed out.
Eu lê todos os 856 capítulos e do inicio ao fim eu fiquei preso à história, recomendo muito a leitura para quem gosta de protagonistas poderosos e não aguenta mais novel com harém, uma das melhores novels que já lê(já lê muito mais que 50 novels )
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