Love it so far! Writing quality is good. Character design is simple but effective.
this is based off and inspired from one piece as it is my favourite , if you love this give me reviews on everything, if this gets enough love we will surely create a manga and go pro on this project
Overall a good start, the author certainly has talent. However the development would benefit from some adjustments. Sometimes following between the chapters is a bit difficult. This is something that can certainly be improved. Apart from that it is interesting. I think that this story has great potential.
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Amazing book, the interactions between the fl and ml is so fluent. Amazing book author ?
you work is good but the beginning is similar to attack on Titan..but it's great cept you cant't deny you got ideas from there
"Well friends, before we go home, how cursed we are if we pray first, pray begin."
Currently Jesseca's suspect is being arrasted, Jesseca can be entangled in the Constitution 5491 paragraph 2 which contains' Whoever makes other people toxid will be suffer.
"But what if he don't want listen to what i said?" said the man.
We go out in the house and it seems the house really a mansion but the more questioning is why a mansion is in the middle of the forest? Oh well, why would I care I only wanted some sleep after we reach our destination but if this two plotting something then let's play with them a little bit.
"I just..."
It has been four months since she was doing this job. 8months ago she left her college....smiling too....n many other things too.