Inspiring storyNice characters, nice background,Strong Mc.Nice story over all.It seems that I have found a story that I like.The only problem I have with your story is its updating stability.I dont know the periods between your releases. Pls, I hope you can inform us about the duration.Thank you.Keep it up
Based on what I read, this novel has quite detailed and vivid imagery, especially when describing each character's pain or reactionary. The prologue is pretty good, to be honest especially with the pirate's settings.As for the MC, I think he is fine for now and I like that he has a close relationship with someone. But, I hope I can see more about the background of his life and further development.For the cons, this is my personal taste, but I guess I need to add more detail when showing things such as objects like the pirate ships and character appearance. Personally, I am kind of hard to imagine their appearance since I love to see a well-detailed appearance.I think that's all I have to say, thank you very much and Keep up the good work!!!
Dear author,You have written your story so well, the main leads are tooo gooddd and the way you describe your characters??❤️It's definitely a good read ! ?You won't regret itSo check out this book! ?
read if you enjoy ..............
While it seems pretty good so far, but a pay wall at chapter 16? I’ve barely read anything and you’re already asking me to pay. The author also doesn’t seem to interact with commenters from the 15 chapters of comments I’ve seen so far.
Please pick it, this is one of the best synopses(idk if thats a word) that i have ever read.
This novel is my unique cretion in this novel the system is unique and extra ordinary and the main carecter is unique and different mind set and the way of story is going is unique so please check it out , thank you
Just by reading the first 3 chaps you know for sure that the author has skills, be writes as is describing a world that he is living it .The mc , yeah i can feel everything he is feeling , his loss his pain , his confusion to be reincarnated again, yeah i only want to say , please give this author a chance because he can amaze for sure .
Been looking forward to Yuan Tong's first novel. Hope this sees the light of day and not just stay as a trial read. It's a lot more laid back and fast paced compared to Unusual Creatures and Dawnbreaker but the sci-fi/mystical aspects are already showing through.
And this is the only Yuan Tong novel with a harem. Not sure if that's good or bad cuz lots of people just hate harems for the sake of hating harems and wouldn't even touch works that have them cuz they think that makes them look smart and hip lol.
This was amazing I loved the story development, world bulilding, and the writing, I loved literally everything about it, out of all the game novels i have read this is the best one
Hey guys I am the editor. I hope that you guys enjoy the story! What I like about this story is that the MC isn't stupid and isn't salivating over girls the entire time. The possible paths that the story can take are almost endless (I'm at chapter 40), so I look forward to what will happen!
Okay i decided to write a Review finally after i picked this novel up again because I love it. It was one of the first novels I ever read and I enjoyed it a lotI was there from 50 chapter until now and the quality is still amazing keep up the good work Thx that you continue to post again now