Ah. We havent got a quality sh like this for so long.
439-440 something is wrong with these 2 chapters it feels like a certain part was cut off it is the same with the other sites they all been cut off.
Not to my knowledge, no ?
If you guys wondering that I am using AI for writing this story then you aren't wrong. But, each and every idea, concepts, creativity, characters, plot, story developments, dialogues and direction are my own including the minor details like slow motion, dance of blood, etc. I am using AI just for language improvement and better usage of words to enhance the story. Just for better presentation. But I am not solely depended on AI. Instead sometimes I edit what AI has written, lol. In between there are many paragraphs written by me and not AI and this story is a blend of human creativity along the usage of AI to enhance the outcome and present a story for the new era.
Conclusion: Language improvement by AI but story is not written by AI !! I said this now itself before people begin to criticize saying the story is written by AI and I got no creativity when the truth is I only improve the language and second reason, honesty is the best policy, :) I myself say this to new writers, do not completely use AI to write your story using AI's ideas and present them as your own, let there be your own creativity and use AI for enhancement of language, to get a blend of creativity for the new era, new generation. Keep everything together, a balance of everything, coz when there is balance, that's where things work. It's free advice! Take it or leave it. Next, Writing a review for my own story to get more engagement lol. I had been wondering for a while, the world is just so saturated and highly competitive that it feels frustrating that many people have the same idea and uniqueness is lacking. Even though you try your best to present something that might stand out and in the end you see your idea was already taken by someone else. But you still never give up until you reach that point where there is something that only you alone can think in this world and present it before someone else can. I hope every writer reaches that point and writes brilliant stories. Rest I wanted to say that...
"I am... The Revolution!"
I can't believe i was lucky enough to even stumble upon this treasure. This is Peak ?, I've been 100% agreeing with the MC this entire time, the writing quality amazing and just everything about this novel got me hooked from the very first chapter.
SINCE YOU ASKED TO RATE THE FIRST 10 CHAPTER, HERE IT IS:
The ONE has a cool idea, but the way it’s written is sometimes NOT VERY smooth. Even though there are some parts that are really good, there are also parts that are hard to understand. I’m still enjoying it and want to know what happens next.
BE CONSISTENT, ALSO AT UPDATING. You're doing a good job already.
I loved TGV(the author's previous work).
Sure, many took it as NTR coz they had 0 braincells fueling their brain, many had problems with other parts of the story, but to me, the story itself was a masterpiece.
What brought TGV down was the instable update rate, and the subpar writing quality.
So yeah, I openly blame the author for ruining my experience with TGV.
I was apprehensive to start this, worrying it would just be a repeat of TGV. Well, partly, no.
The updates are stable(tho it doesn't say much since there are only 15 chapters out rn), and the writing has improved.
What is a problem however, is the POV. The novel is written in 3rd person POV, since a majority of WN seems to dislike 1st person POV for some incomprehensible reason, this works in the favor of readers.
However, the author decides to use first person pronouns like 'my' more often than not while narrating. It may seem like a minor issue, but while reading, a sudden disparage in the POV like this can be extremely immersion breaking.
That aside, the story itself, along with the characters is very good. There isn't much to say seeing as how there aren't much chapters out yet, all I have to say is that give this story at least 7 chapters before you decide whether to continue or drop. The intro is done by that part, and you will get an idea of what to expect going forward.
Since this novel managed to pick my interest, I will be looking forward to reading more of it while hoping the author doesn't mess up again. And hey, imo, the story is worth the chances.
Toika style
I am so glad I found this story
I think that this is a ridiculous book - has so much potential- the fact that he’s pissed because he thinks Aiden is her lover and he feels all disrespected he screws his harem and that’s ok - and what about the mate bond - needs to be reworked all it does is frustrates you I had to quit reading it
I honestly can't get enough of this story!!
Wish I could buy this as an outright book