I'm dropping by to give you a 5-star rating. I actually thought about reading this story before I even knew that you write it. So I will be checking this out very soon. I'm in the middle of writing a new werewolf story on the side of my vampire God story. But I will check this out as soon as I am able to it sounds interesting. Good luck comrade.
I agree with akhbar 89 this novel is confusing and tries to add way to much information withought consolidating there ideas l. I admit I only read the first 15 chapters and even that was a chore,however so many issues have popped up that makes it hard to read. 1st the status of the mc makes. no since, he is a tranmigrator that somehow also knows of the most popular vr game "War" major players even though his suppose to be from a different world. He is supposedly the world maker/ system while at the same time blending in as a average character who is barely above the supposed professional gamers. what realy got me is he complained about not getting a specialized class advancement event hough easily starts recommending hidden classes to other players and he supposedly designed the hundreds of classes.2nd its way to confusing abouight if this is another world in invading physical plain, virtual world game impacting physical world, excedra3rd character development is terrible. as of so far character development is pretty much , oh this person is... profession player in war as ...class , so they choose .. class. 4th in my oppion the real world elements makes this novel feel dull , as it seems to me it results in alot of deposition that will likely be pointless in the future; when suddenly the novel goes back to the action the characters have suddenly leveled up alot. it for this primary reasons I find this novel confusing and can not recommend it.
Читал я эту новеллу и скажу одно очень понравилось наблюдать за гг и его проблемами. Очень хорошая работа была проделана автором но есть недостатки.
this is going to be my first review after checking out 3 chapters of the story. so far pretty good we expect the typical vr gaming background if you have read one before. i just dont like the mc character pretty coward . he got this old classmates bullies for some reason he is afraid of them and my imagine is running wild because a normal guy would only be afraid of physical bullying since base on my opinion and info i have read so far, he is someone who does not care about social life. somewhat of a recluse quiet child .If i were the mc i should at least try to do some self defense he is 5 feet 9! if i am going to bully him as a 5 6 when i was 14 years old back then i will at least think twice regardless of his physical type. the bully trope is getting old now a days since we know that typical quiet child is not afraid to pull a trigger to kill his classmates like in america hahahah. i want to see our 5 9 mc grow some backbone if he is being physically intimdiated because as i mention i dont see the mc getting affected by words or insult to have that kind trauma. so i say it is pretty unrealistic to me as a common citizenso far very good introduction. i think i need to read more chapters before updating this review but it at least got me hookup and the story is interesting.
I couldn't even get past the first chapter this book is so cliché and poorly developed/written.
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Legendary story about a ruthless protagonist. If you are a fan of fang yuan of reverend insanity, soul of negary and everybody likes large chests for the fantasy worldbuilding then this is a book for you.
this is an excellent book! you really should read the first book of the series before reading this one the name of that book is Spirit Cultivation! it is excellent book there are highly recommend!
Incredibly boring, the mc does things just because the author says so, he doesn't have any motivation or desire, he just exists and reacts to the system.His "peak cultivation" means nothing because mr.author was smart enough to downplay it right away by introducing this so called world awakening, his cultivation is so irrelevant that he shows it off in chapter 9 just to save a girl he doesn't care about (oh by the way, we have the out of touch boomer: "it's just a woman" kind of writing so expect every female character to be one dimensional shells and massively objectified)
I love it <3 I see the story improving with each chapter. The author actually listens to the readers! I have a friend who is a writer, and I know from him how much effort he puts in each and every chapter. So, thanks for your efforts Author tan!
Dont like it ;£!?()£!?(6£?.(!?()£??()!!66£?
Chinese name: 绝代名师 (Peerless master)User rating in China: 8.4Status: Ongoing (1219 chapters)Not my cup of tea, I guess it's worth reading is you like LoHP