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Exciting and mysterious.The novel could only be described with these two words.Although only two chapters have been uploaded, but they still couldn't hide the potential this work holds..Waiting for more updates.
The synopsis sounds good and the first chapter is very well written. Saved to read for future reading when more chapters are released. Can’t wait for this to be out!!!
How is the girl gonna give him the bracelet. Will they meet again? I'm so interested in next cheap. When is the next chap be released. Did she started liking him
This story is unique and well written. The system is more than the general systems that you see in other novels, which is great for people who like to read system novels like myself and got tired of repeated novels in the same genre.On a side note I agree with mrpixeltech on his remarks regarding the system's feedback, and my humble opinion regarding that is for our author to have a chapter at the beginning of the novel to be changed with the progress and a note in the author's thoughts to inform us of the update.Looking forward to more chapters and alot of great ideas through the story.Best wishes for a great novel.
Let me just say this out loud: the fact that young Chu Zilan and young Xiao Wenjing met during a life-or-death chase, that she pushed him into a cave and ran back to face danger, that she gave him a bronze compass as a talisman—this changes EVERYTHING about how I read their present-day interactions. When Xiao Wenjing sees Ding Li looking at the illusion, his gaze is described as "like the moment a tiger in the wild considers its prey before tearing it apart." That's not just menace. That's someone whose entire emotional framework is built around protecting Chu Zilan, and anyone who gets too close becomes a threat. But then he looks at Ding Li, hesitates, and instead of killing her, he asks "Are you sick?" after she pokes him with light. The disgust on his face? I think that's relief he's not processing. And the water cup scene at the end—Lu Qianchuan offering it, and Xiao Wenjing SNATCHING it away to feed Ding Li himself. The text says: "Trying to steal a chicken only to lose the rice." Ding Li's internal monologue is screaming but the reality is that Xiao Wenjing has already positioned himself as her guardian in a way that has nothing to do with Chu Zilan. He's protecting her now, not because of the past, but because she's HIS problem to deal with. That shift is so subtle and I'm obsessed with it.
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I think the story is off a pretty good start! There are grammatical and sentence structure errors here and there, but the author said he's doing his best to improve on that. Plus, despite the errors, it still does not take away from the interesting plot and storyline! I think Kairen is so far relatable and you can understand the world from his perspective. I also sympathize with him and his struggles and I can't wait to see more into this second world he has been taken into! Keep up the awesome work, author! And, readers? You should give this story a read!
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism: The constant multiple scene changes within a single chapter are confusing (speaking of POV's). I don't understand the world at all. I can see the intention and potential of the plot and characters, but also see a lack of depth and follow through on those. Positive Feedback: Good character and story ideas. Also, Seems like you are keeping to the post rate you promised. Only spotted one grammar error.Personal Feedback: Good ideas with a ad execution, my apologies, but I will not be continuing this novel. I hope you continue for those who enjoy your book, I just can't enjoy a book that seems like the author was just trying to rush all their ideas (not rush through the story...the story is actually quite slow... It just feels like the story making process was rushed)
Quick better synopsisRandom boi gets isekaid and gets a syatem that lets him increase his cultivation spped if he is near another person with higher talent
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