I like it for now... its different from other vr novels its a interesting idea hope you keep it up with the updates and dont drop it btw i didn't read the whole novel just read the 1 chapter.. but for just the idea of a vr game that you can cultivate you get 5 stars from me.
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Please add lots of realms it make it interesting and others as well like , more quest but don’t make long unless it’s main quest, more martial techniques more disciple more talent like alchemy, acupuncture, formation, blacksmith, and other earning lots of points buying lots of thing making a grand sect in each realm make mc godlike and make chapters longer
Same weird comedy that's abundant in the original Chinese webnovels is again used in an original novel! The overuse of "misunderstandings" trope is so much that it got unbearable atleast for me. I understand the title of the novel is not a cultivator but still is the MC going to stay a mortal all his life hiding behind others? He gets stabbed by his crazy yandere fiance and he can't do **** to even stop or protect himself as he's a mortal trash. That yandere ***** should be killed first. Everyone misunderstands the MC for even the tiniest things. There are hit fan favourite comedy or action/cultivation novels that use this trope a lot but they are applied more naturally. The MC gets to faceslap everyone but here the MC gets slapped either way. His father a prestigious clan leader couldn't get his son a couple of strong & reliable bodyguards. No he had to get two complete dumbasses that are weak & don't care about their duty. They give a small reason but after all the issues that they had caused they should have been executed. Really in such a world which clan wouldn't have shadow forces or secret strong bodyguards for the leader & young master of the clan? The guy couldn't just get him some absolutely loyal bodyguards that would be willing to take their own lives before revealing the truth about the MC's crippled/mortal status. Well it's my personal opinion and I'm dropping the novel. If anyone doesn't like some of the same things that I mentioned then you would be better off reading someother novel. But if you like this kind of comedy and would like to see how the MC is going to get out of all his troubles then please read. I know some like it. I appreciate the author's effort. Thank you.
It is a wish fulfilment novel, however it sets itself apart from others as it is not a pile of trash and is definitely one of the best of it's kind. A few cliches are used such as the extraordinary genius trope and the ever improving talent however it is done well.I think itd have been better if you started off with him being a bit aimless and him mutating and upgrading his vein at the same time next to that tribulation essence when he gains enlightenment. However that is just a suggestion.
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All good, I am fan of cultivation novel so if you are as well this is worth your time. i am following author from previous two books (sorry for late review)but his novels have lot of potential. What else we can want rather than super strong mc on his journey to the top. Already rooting for new chapters....
This looks like it was edited by a professional, instead of the usual new inexperienced unpaid interns from the last few cycles! I almost had a stroke from surprise!
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I have only one word to describe this novel extremely good . You might have realized it more than one word but even extremely good is not enough to describe the novel if I were to reword it it would be “ superb”
Well written but excruciatingly uninteresting. As usual this novel is very generic and doesn't even attempt to distinguish itself from every other simulator novel out there but that isn't my biggest gripe with this.Ever since the MC simulated the life where he writes a novel, everything feels incredibly bloated, boring and unnecessarily detailed. I don't mind the whole novel writing gimmick, what I do mind is that you could have condensed all of that nonsense into 3 chapters easily.I for the first time ever in a trial read very quickly skimmed through most of it but unsurprisingly lost none of the essence of what happened. This novel's unjustifiably enormous self indulgence is baffling and just ruined whatever little it had going for it. 0.25/5.
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