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I absolutely love this book just as much as the first book!!
I want to love it but the run on sentences are crazy. Makes it super hard to read/understand
Absolutely loving this book and I 100% understand its not the only one being done but just wondering if there gonna be more consistency with updates? I flew through it, and now it seems like its taking ages just for 1 chapter and then waiting another while for another one. ADORING THE STORY THOUGH!!
Too many loop holes in story how come Weston didn't suspect that corpse is not actual Stella and when did Roger brother get chance to change that poison and how did she get pregnant with twins.I mean author has already stated that Stella only kid is dead thousands of time(too unrealistic)
lovethis story , I do hope we get an update soon
Wow I thought this story has stopped midway But surprise update Loving it Waiting for more
Absolutely loved it
I can't wait to read more of the novel
loved the books. thanks. take time with your family and finish the 3rd when you are able.
I just finished reading chapters 60-67 and I need a minute because the pacing in this sequence is absolutely ruthless in the best way. Let me break it down. Chapter 60-something opens with what feels like a slice-of-life interlude—honey mint water, family moments, selling food in town. It's warm. It's cozy. You're relaxing, right? Wrong. Because by chapter 64 or so, the author starts threading in these tiny unease signals. Yan Mother mentioning villagers' lips are blistered. The decision to stop selling pig offal because 'it doesn't store well' in this heat. The quiet conversation between Lu Qingran and Yan Zihao about warning the parents. Then the Dragon Boat Festival! A whole scene of normalcy—making zongzi, the family eating together, watermelon for the kids. It's almost too peaceful. And that's when you know the author is winding the spring tighter. By chapter 67, the mask comes off completely. Water levels dropping. Grain prices rising. The village chief being mentioned as someone they'll need to coordinate with. The chapter ends on this note about the rice shop being crowded and prices going up. No cliffhanger question, no dramatic exclamation—just the cold fact that seven wen per jin is the new normal and the harvest is two weeks away. The structure here is brilliant because it mirrors how real disasters unfold. It's not one big explosion—it's a series of small realizations that accumulate until you can't unsee them. The author lets you feel the ground shifting under your feet, one chapter at a time. And I was absolutely hooked the entire way.
oh my goodness!!! I love this they are soo playful!!! my favorite part was them both running from livia and smiling I wish it could stay like this
Great read so far with a single father. I enjoy the different dynamic of the combination as opposed to the single mother again, which is most common. it's interesting having the man be the caretaker. The story is sweet so far, however updates are slow.
