The box was a maroon colour, it was exceedingly plain but somehow still managed to seem extraordinarily professional, the only thing that really stood out about it was the weight of the box. But after I noticed the the golden initials H.V engraved in the middle of the lid, my entire view of this "plain" box changed.
The beds was a thin layer of cotton sheet and the tent had another layer of thin sheet to prevent the cotton sheets from getting dirited by the ground.
Why would you love him? Ignoring Aela she continued to walk towards the village. Getting closer to the village they could see guards stationed behind a crudely built wall. Seeing a beastkin and an elf they let them in without stopping the two. Mostly because they were dumbfounded by the beautiful pair and it was to late as they had already entered. People stared but Sasori found it odd as there was very few men in the village. Aela also noticed but as they walked by the small tavern a large group of ten to fifteen adventures where gathered. Almost in unison the group of adventures that mostly consisted of men looked at the pair. Some stared with a hint of lust while others just stared in awe. The village was rather desolate no one was selling anything. Seems like the gate devastation reached even here. Aela agreed with Sasori as they continued walking a young teen elf girl with a sylphlike figure and long blonde hair ran up to them begging to save her sister from the goblin mob.
Furthermore, Dan blew a breath of air into Leora's red ears, causing her to blush even further.
He should be strong and even quite smart, and not like all that bluff says. If so he must be hiding his strength, then, the big question is if the Emperor is also behind it. Being like that will mean that the Fifth Prince is indeed the favourite son of the King just like told in the rumours as it must be to protect him but if not, with all those ridiculous rumours, it means he is in no way liked by the King… hmm…' she stopped to muse a bit; before, she had thought it didn't matter whether it was the former or the latter but now she wanted to know which one had the higher possibilities of being true.
Every character seems bipolar.MC goes from confident and calm one moment, to a stuttering mess the next cause he sees a strong stick, that had murderous intent, then that stick goes from murderous to acting cute, then the MC who was so afraid he went 'please .... Please.... Don't come closer......' says that the stick is friendly and approachable 5 paragraphs later? Really?Fourth wall breaks I actually didn't mind, I just read em in Morgan Freeman voice.But I've yet to find a likeable character in this book, or anything at all other than the system to hook me in. goddess that acts nice but is a *****? PassStick MC that changes personality every chapter? Pass.Girl leader of alliance who's both a murderous berserker and acts cutesy? Pass.Everyone wants to refine MC into a weapon? Could have been good but just became boring. PassThere's yet to be a single hook that made me want to continue, not even the MCs growth path as he already knows exactly what he wants, and how to get there, it's like googling a build for a game, will you end up strong? Sure. Is it fun? No.
I was frozen in place and had no clue what to do, but then in the blink of an eye i had a sharp pain on my side. He had kicked me . I screamed, so loud that people started pouring out of the theater rooms. Soon enough I saw his face. Andrius was there. He had ran over and punched him in the face. From what I saw the man was on the floor knocked out with blood coming from his lip.
As he said that, Ori noticed the shock on the faces everyone present, especially his attacker. Even though Ori had no idea who this young arrogant man was everyone else clearly did.
But when the student raised his sword to swing at her, she felt the familiar coldness slowly creeping inside her body and she couldn't help but tremble.
''Haha my Demon Race just got another Emperor rank cultivator this is the cause of celebration. Once we shall return to the ancestral grounds we shall celebrate your breakthrough but first, we need to get rid of the current situation.'' Emperor spoked happily.
don't stop this one. it's good one to be honest I was waiting for this kind of novel so you better write it full don't stop midway
The writing quality is pretty awful, at least at the beginning. But the story has some potential.