The story was great until chapter 72 as from that point on it was just repeating which was a large disappointment as the story was really intresting
this novel is destined to have 40 chapters only.... because it's designed that way........................................................................................
The first 49 chapters are intersting and, I liked the progress of the chracters and the pace of the story.But can't read chapter 50 and onwards because it is only the previews, hope that can be fixed soon as posible, would like to read the rest of the chapters.
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Basically, it's a mess. The author is incoherent and the translator keeps making mistake with pronouns he/she, his/her.For example, MC is supposed to to have a lvl 80 character however it has the stats of a lvl 1 noob. If the level doesn't increase stats (like in 99% of games/stories) then author needs to say what it's used for.Also, this is supposed to be a game that transformed into a reality and sometimes, author says MC and his character act like one but the next moment he talks about keyboards...
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It is only five chapters and I hope your Webnovel will grow, for the first chapters already made me noticed how complicated and how sci-fi this Webnovel is.
By the way, the System looks legit as a Magic ability since the System concept has always been around to a magic character.
Probably the best trial read.
This Novel has an interesting plot with great drama and suspense. Love this novel and can't wait to see how the story unfolds and also how Indra regains his throne??
This Author has turn Dragon Ball into a Chinese novel. The name's of all iconic character's are completely Chinese name that are completely different, also the grammar is bad like I could barely read it. Author change KI into QI, messed up on all titles for gods an everything. The most disturbing thing to watch out for is goku name in this book is not goku anymore. If you see any 5 star or 4 star review then it's fake. Though all that said the Author did a pretty good job on creating his MC that's why the 2 star. Also his MC isn't overpowered at the start is another plus for me. Another plus is MC not a simp or beta.
I love this novel. The story progresses is very well. I hope that the relationship between the hero and heroine will improve..........................