The jump of scenarios from vhapter 12to 13 is abit unnerving, and confusing
Going to miss this novel ang it took me 2 years to finally finish reading "Beauty and the Beasts" maybe some of readers won't like this novel but who cares.Anyway i love this and that's ok and also i want to thank the authors and translators for giving me a great good novel to read.3
More than anything, I'm excited to reach the part of the novel where the excerpt in the synopsis is from. I can already imagine the look on people's faces on both sides when they realize that their ally/enemy is the same person.
When I first read the synopsis I was happy, as it is rare to find a book where the MC is not either dicking around with diff girls or being hella overpowered. But well it disappointed me, the first 4 chapters of yours they are very boring. I do know that you might have wanted to explain the world's background but you could've taken a diff approach.
All I am trying to say even though your story might be amazing or the idea behind is amazing, the way you put it in the words was a little Disappointing.
Don't mind me, just giving credit were credit is due. Teehee.I'm sure once you read it, you'll fall in love with it's appeal too.
Honestly I had a high expectation for this novel, but the author tried play smart and made the Mc a slave for a girl that he barely knew, he got injured in the most stupid way, I mean the the two Supreme dragons can talk to him, they could have warned him about it but no they decided to let him get injured seriously so they can make him a slave, it’s so forceful that I felt like vomiting when I read that part.Let’s not forget about his sister who at first seemed to be injured then became cursed, main character doesn’t even have the body memory except for his parents being tortured and him running away.And the main character was supposed to be smart and ruthless he couldn’t sleep because he was traumatized please, he couldn’t stand the stares he was receiving please, he almost couldn’t hold himself because of a girl please man that’s stupid.And the worst part is the main character refusing to get stronger in a world that he knew that strength is everything because of stupid fear that he will gather attention.I think the autho should remake it, and will not talk about the name of the novel.Good luck
Your book was really good; it provided detailed descriptions that allowed me to imagine the scenes in your story. I also appreciated your clear writing style, which helped me to understand the plot. Overall, it was a great read, although I found the name of the main character a bit long. By the way, I particularly enjoyed the way you described Shiroha in one of the chapters. Your description was so vivid that I felt like I could already picture her appearance
The protagonist is a villain in every sense of the word. He r@pes, murders (not too much of that yet) and manipulates.If you're uncomfortable with such acts, you should read something else.As of chapter 133, there are 11 harem members and only three have affection for him (the rest of them were either raped or saw his true, depraved face). One of my few grips with the females in this novel is the fact that most of them have identical body proportions: large to ample breasts and voluptuous bodies. Besides that, it's an ok read.
By far one of if not the best novel on this website, currently the author is working on another novel so don't be scared, if you think he is abandoning this novel he isn't, he's just busy working on his other novel.
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all I can say is, good concept but lackluster writing. The 'owner of a magical shop' troupe is interesting but the phrasing of the words and grammar pulls one out of the storyI really like the concept so if you want me to edit some chaps for free hit me up on discord: Daoist RedSnow#2180
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