NightRider01
What happened to this book, it's been stuck at this point for 2 years if not more, it was and still is one of the best reads I have ever had in my life, someone save it from dieing please
Finally MC with Western name now i can remeber your goddann name. Im already waiting this so long since RTW. Finally finally i can remeber the character name easily
I really liked the story, a very original idea and very well written, I look forward to reading more, I hope the author continues to write.
Like really i will be totally honest, this story when i started reading, I ACTUALLY thought that this would a good novel as it seemed to have potential and then It actuall went from good to TRASH IN the first 5 chaps and guess what? IT WONT GET ANY BETTER AT ALL. I still thought it might change. BUT NO, it actually kept getting worse. NORMALLY I DONT MAKE A REVIEW I have read many novels here and other site. Like really way too many. BUT THIS NOVEL, I have to say THIS IS A HUGE DISSAPPOINTMENT
Hii, author here. Although it is a bit shameless for me to rate my own work lol!But a author most have confidence in his own work. I just wanted to say that reviews,comments and votes will greatly help in supporting my work. Your encouragement is the key to continue my work.
Always fun to read and pretty funny at times. The first few hundred chapters are more serious and the characters are mostly dominating and arrogant. The story gets better and more interesting later on
What's that yaoi tag? Seriously? If it's true I have to drop it. Yu Come one man it's a good story. Please don't made it yaoi. If the tag was false please remove it or you will lose more viewers than you can imagine.
From the very first time I rest my eyes on you, boyMy heart said follow through but I know nowThat I'm way down on your lineBut the waiting feeling's fineSo don't treat me like a puppet on a stringBecause I know how to do my thingDon't talk to me as if you think I'm dumbI want to know when you're gotta come, you seeI don't want to wait in a vain for your loveI don't want to wait in a vain for your loveI don't want to wait in a vain for your loveCause summer is hereAnd I'm still waiting thereWinter is hereI'm still waiting thereLike I saidIt's been three years since I'm knocking on your doorAnd still I can knock some moreOoh boy, ooh boy, is it crazy look, I want to know nowFor I to knock some more, you seeIn life I knowThat there is lots of griefBut your love is my reliefTears in my eyes burnTears in my eyes burnWhile I'm waitin'While I'm waitin' for my turn, you seeI don't want to wait in a vain for your loveI don't want to wait in a vain for your loveI don't want to wait in a vain for your loveCause summer is hereAnd I'm still waiting thereWinter is hereI'm still waiting thereLike I saidI don't want to, I don't want toI don't want to, I don't want toI don't want to wait in vainI don't want to, I don't want toI don't want to, I don't want toI don't want to wait in vainIt's been three years since I'm knocking on your doorAnd still I can knock some moreOoh boy, ooh boy, is it crazy look, I want to know nowLike I said, the tears in my eyes burnTears in my eyes burnWhile I'm waitingWhile I'm waiting for my turn, you seeOoh boy, ooh boy, is it crazy look, I want to know nowFor I to knock some moreIn life I know there is lots of griefBut your love is my relief
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Hopefully the author doesn’t delete my review.SPOILERThe Mc was naive for a very long time.(100+ chapters)You can’t even give a proper excuse for that. He was almost killed more than the fingers on my hands, yet he still chose to trust people? He was told multiple times to not do so but he doesn’t listen. Then his friends try to kill him for the sake of their clans, and they think all is well? He’ll listen and forgive us? Like we didn’t try to kill him. The only question I have is “does he forgive them”. The plot was good at first but now it’s just not good. It was dragged out for way too long. Hopefully this novel gets a redo.
like I've requested of the author before , let the stories include more breast sucking and fondling and more explicit scenes .. lovely stories most of them but more of a repetition .
this is good, mc is cursed and everything he do will be reversed... at first I was started getting annoyed by his teacher actions.. but then I found it amusing... story is fine.. what I like most is mc himself.. his actions are funny and dialogues are quite enjoyable to read... I did like to read further...
