/"Your poker face isn't as good as you think it is, my little Sun Princess. I can just feel the sarcasm wafting off those unimpressed eyes."/
The story of the young Leo was an amazing experience for me because of your work I was hoping for you to make another one or continue the series. Please continue your work I hope to see more
A rare find. This novel has a refreshing take on system/cultivation themes. Despite its low power ranking, it's easily in the top 10 novels this app has to offer in terms of quality and originality. For me personally it has dethroned Psychic Parasite as the number 1 novel on the app.
Amazing work. The writing quality is well above excellent, not too repetitive to feel boring and not too "purple-prose" to make the readers lose interest either.The story development is good, with the pace being a mix of slow and fast depending where it needs to be.The mc is intriguing and has a lot of potential. His motivations are simple and plain yet - to become a Magus. I wonder what it'll become when he achieves his current goal.The world, to be honest, is the one thing that has interested me the most. It's vast and full of all kinds of possibilities, and I can see that the author has a vision in its creation.A 5/5 start from me.
Up to date with the released chapters. The story is good but there have been more flaws as we keep on moving forward.1) Poor grammar, but readable.2) Too much information overload in some parts, but makes sense.3) Too much cringe lines. 4) MC thinking the subordinates can betray him and doesn't want to trust the system too much, when it is literally the system giving him everything.5) MC gets soul coins from killing other beings, but in recent chaps(specially in the forbidden areas part), he gets no soul coins from killing so many powerful cultivators.6) MC taking risks for no reason, like he accompanied Isadora to unknown regions when he was just at Golden Core, then goes on to fight Core Formation Tree God when there was risk of failure. Why the heck would the author make MC go out when he doesn't have information on those parts. He could just wait and upgrade his strength and slowly scout out the regions through his subordinates.It is readable, but there are many things that could be improved.
Author review and message to all the readers. First of all, thank you for taking the time to read my work and I hope that you enjoyed it. Second of all, this work will be slow-paced in the first 40 chapters to set up the plot and the character development/ true essence of Genesis The Priest. After that, it will be very spicy with a very good plot twist.Trust me!
The story is good and I'm looking for further chapters
Ok, here we go. This is my first novel but I am getting a little hang of it. English is my second language so there are probably grammatical mistakes. But I will try to upload chapters regularly. You can check out my patreon for more chapters.
Man I must admit you've wrote a very good novel
A great book. It portrays a clash between values and society of different worlds. As a idol from earth gets reincarnated in to another world where music is banned if it does not send the same message as the government. A world where music is used to control. A great pretense, although the author has been away lately. This book has great potential and I'm eagerly waiting for more.?
10/10 very good a lot of lemon high quality writing hot characters and a varietys of personalities and the lemon scenes are very hot and sexy
I hardly see a synopsis begins with this many questions. It is intriguing and refreshing. The story is also interesting. Please keep going and write more! Good job, author! I enjoy reading it. ?