Finished this 2 days ago.
A bit rushed ending, final arc is
Yeah no thanks, I don't like the present tense here, feels very off and doesn't flow good, but Ill continue to read anyways
Kudos to you the MC. I'm really enjoying this story and it's interesting...
Don't read it at any cost guys! All the review this novel has are just fake reviews made by some alt accounts except for mine. The so called author wasn't happy without any review so he did it, bruh...
After reading the last few chapters I can tell that the stories going down a path of constant brawls driving the plot; which I can't say I dislike. This is the first book I've completed since the others all went premium, and I hope we get more chapters soon enough.
with the author's experince from tos and hoa this novel is gonna be fire. just read and i want more if only i could travel through and binge read the entire thing without having to wait
Hurt people, hurt people, but can it be excused when everyone gets a glimpse of the hurt? This sequel, of Alanor, the Lycan King's Prisoner, tells the story of a mate once rejected and broken by the rejection. A man who once had life in his eyes only for darkness to break him to pieces. With no one to lash out on without risking his reputation in front of Alanor and his people, Grant takes it out on the one person he is sure won't ever fight back. His omega mate. But is he really an Omega? Then again will that ever matter to Grant?
I’m going to review this for you. This story is actually good. If one day it was to be a shounen, it would make a decent one, for this ill leave a good rating. Also, pretty good book for a single writer.
Writing- It is very good, cause the way you expressed it in a documentary style.
as for the updates pls Im begging nex chapter pls... nah its good just keep your own pace pls make a discord. story is somewhat good. though you already used history and add something here and there, atleast you should put a bit of of diversity from our own timeline like the part where atleast bonifacio is not dead but atleast imprisoned, or the japanese or germans aiding us discreetly because they are business rivals with the americans.
I will tell you the truth. This looks like a movie script adapted from a comic book and we know from experience that without an Iron Man played by a charismatic actor to hire more writers the trend is towards standard justice league stories without the special effects.
one of the better novels in here. system novel, that logically explained itself and tied up most of the loose plots at ending. i read the whole thing, and inhave to say it was enjoyable all the time and i had no such times when i wanted to drop it. standing ovation for author from me. shame ending was cut so short, wished for a bit more trivia and short stories here ;(
I think your story is very creative, mostly the background is interesting. I like your writing style. Hope to read more. Keep up with your amazing work Author.