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The novel gets a Really good, but I am only giving it one star because it feels that they are making the chapters A LOT SHORTER, just to gain more stones. I am not enjoying the novel so much anymore, and if this keeps up, you will lose readers.
Awesome novel! I've gotten completely addicted to your story. The plot is slightly overused but still original. Well, how do I put this... MC going back in time to save the world type of plot, but the objectives, enemies, and settings are totally different from what I've mostly read.The world is intriguing and unlike anything I've heard before. The fact that there is a 'GOD' ai is still a bit confusing to me and would like to know more about it. I have a lot of questions about it, like why is it evil? Why does the MC want to stop it other than to save the world? How did it become 'GOD'?The MC is smart, catches on to things quickly, and actually relatable. The story progresses at a perfect steady pace, giving enough time for the reader to actually understand and feel the feelings while also moving fast enough so that the reader doesn't get bored. The descriptions are on a whole nother level. They are vivid, visualizes the scene and situation perfectly and actually immersive. There weren't any confusing sentences so far and the action parts were really enjoyable to read. Most of the explanations were logical, natural, and some of them are actual facts. I learned several things that I didn't know while reading this novel. Respect to the Author for doing his research!Lastly, the thing I like most about this is the writing style. It's amazingly appealing, and catches my attention instantly. The sentence structures go well with other sentences and conveys the feelings the author wants. Some of the parts are witty and there are a few relatable sentences and jokes here and there. As a fellow author, I really envy your way of writing and would really love to learn to write like that.In short, I'll give this book a 9/10. I had to deduct a point because your work was so brilliant it made me jealous! Please teach me your way of writing, I simply can't get enough of it! Definitely going to keep reading to the end, no matter how many fast-passes I might have to sink in the future.To everyone reading the reviews, I would 100% reccommend this, especially if you like system and video-games genre. PS: I'm actually serious about wanting to learn from you. Would really appreciate if you can teach me.
I'm still getting used to the translations on this site... but this one's decent. .
Fang Zheng xD looks like Fang Yuan’s brother is moving up in this world, hopefully he has rid himself of that pesky inferiority complex haha...(It’s a reference to Reverend Insanity, great novel, go read it i really reccomend it, no offense to the author or translator intended but the name was just so recognizable i had to make a joke)5 stars cause i haven’t read it yet.
Pretty incredible work here, especially for something so early in. I primarily have nothing but praise for this novel, I mean, I binge read it faster than I do most else. But really this story has had such an incredible progression, the writing quality feels top notch (for the site), and it just feels like this is the start of something great.My main positives:I love the pace here, MC progresses fast, maybe a tad too fast at times, but never too slowOnly 230 chapters in and the scope of this world already feels so vast, and if it’s properly explored, will be incredible (SERIOUS props to author on this).Cool enemy and game design and great setup for many future plot lines.Those are the just the huge positives but there is dozens more, now here’ just the most minor of qualms:Slightly concerned about introduction of unused characters, some of them are awesome,but many feel as though they’l serve a purpose and never be seen againMC hasn’t a ton, but I do suppose this can be excused considering there’s quite literally a trait on his soul dedicated to seeking his revenge :P.Anyway, short for time on this review but INCREDIBLE job, can’ wait to see where this goes!
Wait 5 chapters pr week? I'm not complaining really but this is really an excellent novel.. Hope this will get a lot of power votes and be published. I will hunt down every bookstore for a hardcopy.
I LIKE IT!!! I've just read it for 2 hours and damn I can't get enough..I'll be watching it now an addition to my treasure trove..I hope there is more hahaha
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I have just finished the story and really enjoyed it and at first I didn't know if I was going to keep reading but it always kept me interested in the story and thoroughly enjoyed it next going to try reading condemning the heavens good read suggest you try it out
This novel disappointed me greatly. I have no patience for making people waste their time. Although the story starts off interesting and managed to compel me to reach the end, when I was done I was not happy, i merely wanted the time I wasted reading this back.To me the MC is NOT the protagonist of the book. The protagonist shows up twice and is from a different series. In the end the MC isn't even that useful for the final enemy.So many ideas were brought up, the Saint energy, the MC's child being strong. Yet none of that is all that relevant at the end.My heartfelt opinion is that no one should invest their time into reading this book.