Hmm, This novel wonderful, but it doesn't suit my taste, but it is great that i would put it in my list of favorite novels.But what I like in your novel the most, was when the argonaut raided the althaus state or mansion, I love on how you put details that made me imagine on what really happened, but sadly it was too fast, I didn't get to enjoy or to see the suffering of the servants in the mansion, but althaus gets the worst fate so much suffering and such traumatizing event have happened to his servants, such a scary experience but I want to see more.. but it would a false hope to hope that you will add more of it in the arc, but hopefully I would get to read more of it in the future, hopefully...And yes your side characters/characters, such a splended work they have such a wonderful personalities, I like them hope I could meet some crazy characters, I could put some of my reviews on the characters but they're quite many so I'll pick only ren to review on.ren is such a lame character I hate him and i love him, his such a well done Character that made me hate him, his naive a fool and a trustful person and a lustful person an awkward Character that made it hard for me to read his interactions with other characters, but his a great character that can be easily manipulated and easily changeable, that he put so much trust on a girl that summoned him that easily betrayed him, his such a fool that I like him, the girls action made him distrustful of other people, hence his such a changeable and easily manipulated, his such a fool that he trusted a girl that summoned him into this otherworld, and I don't want to spoil other readers so I'll stop here, but I get it that his a manipulatable person it happened alot in the real world, so his a nice character his such a normal person I like him.The story so far is great but the development of the story is fast it made me bored of reading it cause things happened fast, but for other readers the story has a normal a phase of development, but for me it's fast, but I saw nothing wrong in the story so far.For the the writing quality I don't know, I've never seen some wrong spellings or typos, English is not my first language after all, and the updates of chapters is fast I like it. I'll end my review here I can write more but I think this is enough.
It's an amazing story, I really like it, but what I have to complain about is TWO FAST PASSES PER CHAPTER??! That's just ridiculous, no matter the story.
This novel is amazing even though it has a goofy title(but I like it). Well then, first of all, the grammar is spot on. The stability of updates considering he has college is really impressive. The story developing at a stable pace not too fast not too slow. The character designs are good. The world is vast and yeah, that's pretty much it.
Hello quick question author. Is it another harem nonsense? I don't read harems( don't care if it is small or whatever. But dating different girls during his lifetime is OK as long as he is monogamous during each relationship. Not some cheating pig) , I would rather know upfront to avoid wasting my time.Thanks.
The story has a nice feel to it and I can feel that it is as good as the King Avatar!I wish that there will be a POV on the other team in the earlier chapter to discuss their roles. Then the story will be most perfect. But then, the author moves on straight to the tournament instead of the boring POV which may slow down the pace. So I actually have no complains. Good story, keep up the good work author!
Hello, Welcome. :)For your information, if The Adamant Map has been completed, you can see it as a reference when reading this story.Thank you for your attention.
One of the top original novels right now. I r8 5 stars keep up the good work. Ps. It would be great if the chapter release was a bit faster.
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A lot of errors in this novel, not sure if it’s an issue with the translator or the original author but regardless there are a ton of inconsistencies when it comes to the character attributes obtained or the combat power level. Plenty of other errors as well. Sure you ca. figure out what’s going on but it makes it much less enjoyable to read.
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The sweetest novel i ever read.I just want leon and carla grow quickly nad marry each other.??????????????????????????????
this the same thing as I can create perfect accidents.