Robinsingh9106
It's kinda catchy and interesting, I highly recommend it Read and thank me later ?
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Author , you haven’t updated in over a year , are you still alive ?
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Writing Quality-Some grammar mistakes and mess ups on tenses happen every chapter, but it's not terrible. Story Development- Generally, the story is fine, but there's a lot of BS. "Destiny" is a major theme of this book so the MC is constantly being harassed and manipulated by the gods or powerful "secret" organizations to do what they want whether he knows he's being influenced or not. It's pretty annoying to read about a character like this who can only continue to exist because of plot armor. I wish the author would just not have destiny and manipulation as a primary theme. Character Design- Quite a few characters are generic. Not much I can say about that. Updating Stability- Pretty obvious here. The author hardly misses a day, but chapter length can vary pretty widely. World Background- I like it and it's enjoyable. Just the divine stuff needs to take a back seat. I want him to be his own entity yet every "mission" he's sent on is generally him trying to find out who is manipulating his "destiny" this time around.
please don't drop the novel please don't drop the novel please don't drop the novel please don't drop the novel please don't drop the novel please don't drop the novel
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Everyone this is just my personal views on this novel. This novel is awesome and has a lot of potential to be with the top 50.If you like mmorpg martial gamer then i bet you will like this novel because of the similarities like clans in modern world and a runaway from his clan. So its quite similar also i think it has the game mechanics like 100% completion rate stuff like that so I guess it is inspired by that novel.Author pls dont spam his Attributes its annoying also pls do this to your attributes 50 --- 68 so we wont get confused of what changed. I hope that you will post a stable update for us and Good Luck writing this novel.
Awesome is the word to describe the novel. It's very much engaging and entertainment.....................................................................................................................................
We have a main character with a decent personality, an adorable female lead, and minor characters that have their own character developments. There are no annoying characters that simply live to advance the plot or provoke the MC. The fact that the MC is not blindly arrogant or petty is also a plus. It is set in a cultivation world, and has a heartwarming and leisure vibe. He's living with his lazy master and pampering her in various ways to earn currency for his cheat, stunning her and other characters with his max level skills derived from the system. The characters have their own unique personalities so their interactions are satisfying to read.It's brilliant and enjoyable.
It was finally published. The story was very entertaining I noticed the influence of Fey Evolution Merchant in regards to the grade,ability, and use of runes to evolve the beasts. I hope this will picked. I really love the story.
author you should pick this up , I've been waiting 5 years for some day the on hiatus disappears, really good novel.
