I may not yet read the next more chapters but I already feel that I would also love to read this book. I hope that I can have more free time to read this book and more often leave a comment to enhance more readers to read and understand the flow of this story.
The author is very imaginative...i like the way she dwell with each characters and the plots ahead...it truly stir my imagination aswell as my anticipation to what will happen next...i hope Sofony in the end will still be save from the darkness plots on her life..because Sofony truly not a bad person though totally helpless and desperate she still wants and trying to avoid anything that woyld cause harm to others and to herself.
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Since i like beast-taming, may be my opinion kinda biased. I really like how the plot and the development of the story
amazing story, amazing author, details yet no over detailing.Clear progression and change...............................................,,Just read it. Its one of the best out there.
just like his other stories this one is nicely done as well. oddly though the more I read of this story the more I find self not really caring about the mc and the story itself. I am really interested in the other side, the people with the systems. is there any chance we could get a story from their side or maybe a new story. a story with systems with glyphs on people. idk this story is nicely done but for some reason does not hold my attention like your other stories have.
the world background is nice and detailed. u can actually see how the author would want his readers to see the world that the characters were living in.the story is fantastic and the development is thrilling. the cover looks lit as well.
Like the many others I’m here to complain that this novel was released when It shouldn’t have, what’s the point in the leaderboard like this, just remove it already...
I didn't expect this to be decent. I halfheartedly read this but find that this novel is quite good. Even though the translation deteriorated as chapters released like a second hand faulty phone. Well we can't forget the greedy translators chopping chapter up to 4 or 5 chapters even though in the original it's only one chapter. Overall there's no problem with the novel but the webnovel itself.?
Website : qidian china Views : 9.71 million Rating : 8.7(2165) Chapters : 1717 Status : ongoing rank : 5Word count : 5.15 million author rank : great
Ten chapters in and I already find myself hooked up with the story! I loved Jay and the Black dragon ? Jay's internal monologue was funny. Storyline and characters are really interesting! The plot pace is good, not too slow or fast. Keep that up ? Updates are also stable ?Writing is good but there are few grammar mistakes eg: you put internal thoughts in quotation marks too, so reader can get confused it it's a thought or dialogue. For the rest of the minor errors, the author can use Grammarly tool to edit chapters and they will be easily fixed. That will help a lot ?But otherwise the story is engaging and interesting. Would definitely recommend readers to give it a try ☺️ Good luck with your novel author and keep it up! ?
Lovely story as always. This is definitely going to be an amazing work too!