I really really love your book. the story's so intriguing, alluring and fascinating. totally an amazing read. A must read for everyone. keep up the magnificent work, Author
What a cliffhanger...Now I will be nervously waiting for another update ?
I can’t wait for more chapters to this book. It’s really getting good. I hope it’s updated really soon with more than one chapter at a time.
41 chapters 3-22-23
The author is good at what she does, love her diction ...️...️...️...️...️...️
I really really love this story.. ??
This novel begins intriguingly, with a well-directed plot and diverse harem members, allowing the reader to easily visualize their distinct speech styles without explicit attributions. Allow me to address some criticisms I've come across:
1. Although the web novel (WN) isn't flawless, its strengths far outweigh its weaknesses.
2. The main heroine is a loli, which might be a point of contention for some. To clarify, the vampire character stopped aging at 12, making her significantly older than the MC, who is 16. Some readers might relate to the MC's discomfort, but it's important to remember that age gaps are common in such settings, especially given the context of demon battles.
3. Those who advise against reading it because it's supposedly a waste of time, perhaps they should consider broadening their reading horizons to scientific journals instead of dismissing someone else's enjoyment.
4. One reviewer mentioned disengaging after Kaori's death, but their decision wasn't driven by disappointment; it was a mix of concern and anticipation. The novel's emotional rollercoaster, with its highs and lows, is part of its charm.
5. Lastly, to the person who created an account solely to criticize Yue, the world of the novel may not adhere to our real-life sensibilities. Early marriages are typical in many world-building stories, especially in demon-fighting contexts. Your negative rating doesn't reflect a true understanding or appreciation of the story.
In summary, the novel starts strong, and while it may not cater to everyone's tastes, it offers a compelling and immersive experience for those who give it a chance.
I AM THE BONE OF MY SWORD
Tbate updates are so slow i let it stack at chapter 400 or so and its still in the 400s for like a whole year
If anyone liked this, try "Naruto dream to immortality" . Same sociopath MC ,high IQ except no system at help
The story revolves around Jian Yu and Lu Shijin, whose real-life rivalry began from misunderstandings. In the first part, the action takes place primarily within the game, as Lu Shijin initially enters the game to find a wife due to a dare, but unexpectedly encounters Jian Yu. Initially planning a prank, Lu decides to team up with Jian Yu, unknowingly developing genuine feelings as their misconceptions clear up.
Regarding Lu Shijin's initial remarks to Gu Wuzhong, those issues will be resolved later in the story without any excessive drama.
Here are the main characters:
- Jian Yu (protagonist, shou): He's sharp-tongued and guarded, often appearing dominant, driven by a need to protect himself after being neglected by his parents. Despite his tough exterior, he has a tender heart and thoughtful nature, but struggles to express emotions.
- Lu Shijin (love interest, gong): A mischievous and shameless character, known for his impulsive behavior and occasional dominance. His antics, like scaring Jian Yu's parents, add humor. Though he appears mature in real life, he's actually a playful and devoted partner once he realizes his feelings for Jian Yu.
The novel leans towards comedy, with most of the early plot set in the game world. The drama mainly centers around Jian Yu's strained relationship with his parents and the lingering effects of their neglect.
Overall, if you enjoy MMORPG-themed stories and unique, mischievous love interests, this book would be a fun choice. It's suitable for readers who appreciate characters who act their age, even if it means making mistakes along the way.
Another good novel with slow updates, stacking at chapter 300