I admittedly didn't get far. Mc just sort made me sick. Like people can enjoy villains but despise jerks. in the first ten chapters I just wanted him to lose. Only he'd not be the one to suffer for it. Mc pick up and draft young woman who's family burnt to death alive as his play peice and proceeds to be the most unthoughtful, sexist guilt tripping obnoxious condemnation of religion I can scarce imagine. He is on every level and idiot and terrible as a person and player about Elise and deeply unfunny. Team Rocket treats Pokemon better than he does Elise.
it's really good, I hope it is picked so I can know what's next
this novel would be good if the main character didn't hide his cultivation.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
should be 1 star all around arthur gave up writing on chapter 47. it's almost a direct rip off from another book named magic academy I have infinite skill points.
The author's writing style is clear. The subject seems ordinary at first, but then you see that it becomes interesting. The protagonist is like a white paper on this, it's very suitable for character development, so I'm wondering about character development in future updates.
Dimensional Descent is a story about Leonel Morals and him trying to become as strong as possible as his world starts evolving to the next dimension.Originally, I gave this novel a better score, maybe it's just because I'm burnt out, but looking back on the novel it really isn't as good as I previously stated.Writing quality is great, there isn't many mistakes if you aren't specifically looking for them. (5/5 stars)Story development is where I'm most conflicted. You see, I really can't call it bad when I've read to nearly a thousand chapters. However, I feel like I just walked a thousand steps only to realize theres an innumerable amount of steps more. I have read to chapter one thousand, only to realize the story has gone a little everywhere, while at the same time nowhere. The only difference from the start of the novel and now is that the main character is stronger, and has more connections. It is chapter 1000, and there is still no direction for the novel. The main character has fought so many different organizations, strong enemies, etc, but looking back on it they were all pointless as it feels like none of this helped the main character's non-existent goal. How many more chapters will it take for the story to gain direction? I'm kind of tired of reading about so many "unique" characters only for all of them to be later deemed irrelevant. Aside from all this, I've long lost track of how people "progress". The main character has already done five hundred different ways to get stronger, and they all feel super exaggerated until the main character fights someone. Listen, even if you constantly say "it's a miracle for someone like the main character to fight x." I don't buy it. The main character has such a ridiculously overpowered ability that I feel is super underplayed and overplayed at the same time. His ability does everything, just not that well compared to something else. This story is the definition of the phrase "Jack of all Trades, Master of None." (2/5 stars)As for character design, I can't give an honest answer at this point. All the characters are logical, and do actions that make sense of their character. This might be due to the story rather than the characters, but theres nothing unpredictable about these characters. In one thousand chapters there is not a single character that has surprised me with their actions. Rather disappointing. Aside from that, the main character has such ridiculously slow character development it's stupid. The main character has had a "lot" of character development if you want to play with semantics, but absolutely nothing has changed. His character is the exact same, except he thinks a bit differently on a few things. It's annoying. These characters aren't substantial at all, they all feel hollow with the outline of logic. Also, I will never understand the relationship between Aina and Leonel, it feels like it changes every chapter. Aside from the first portion of the novel, it's basically just Leonel chasing after Aina constantly, and Aina constantly leaving to do something else whilst saying shes in love with Leonel. It's annoying. This is still happening at chapter 1000, and I feel like this whole relationship is too tedious to make sense. (2/5 stars)World background is a mess. They have introduced so many things and none of them conflict with each other. It feels like a world with no standard, no rules. It genuinely feels like the author is just making things up as they go along. This is doubly so for the power scaling/development, theres so many ways to progress, the "best" path for the main character changes whenever the author feels like he didn't praise the main character's overwhelming might enough. Politics are a mess to be honest. I never really understood half of what the author was ranting about. This is a world of dimensions, where the higher the dimensions the stronger the people and planets are. According to the author, a 4th dimensional existence is a god to a 3rd dimensional existence. In theory. The problem with this is it's basically irrelevant the entire story as the main character fights so many people stronger than him it's ridiculous. Aside from that, world background has the same problem that lies with character design and story development. There is a LOT of world background, but nothing really substantial. It feels like they are just padding it out instead of making sure the base is solid. (2/5 stars)Overall, this is a fairly good story superficially. Once you dig deeper you'll realize theres nothing really there, and it gets hard to read. Don't get me wrong, the characters are great, and the fights are thrilling. However I almost immediately got burnt out realizing it was chapter 1000 and realized the story basically hadn't progressed from stage 1. The author is great at writing, but the author made the story go in the wrong direction. I give this novel 3.2 stars out of 5.
Greetings to those of you that'll arrive at this place at a later date.As the author, I'll be giving a shameless review of the book. I trust you guys will have a great time reading this book.The writing quality is good and I'd be happy if you guys drop comments if there's an error found.The story kicks off with a slow start but it gets fast as it progresses. Although, I said it gets fast, I have to inform you that there are also times where I'll have to make the scenes detailed, making it take one or more chapters.The characters are good. I try to describe them as much as I can, so you the readers can get an imaginative idea of the character. Not all characters are thoroughly described though. Luke tends to act without brain lots of times and other times, he's as smart as a human can be.I'll be updating daily for a while. Look forward to getting feedbacks from you all.The world setting isn't Earth as we know it. It's a different world entirely and I'll slowly but surely bring you guys on a tour around the world.THANK YOU ALL FOR CHOOSING "REINCARNATION OF AN ALL-ROUNDER" ??u200d♂️?
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I always love ur novel, i can't wait a new member, i hope everything will be ok for them, and for u keep healthy and save, i wait ur update
Very very very very very very very good. Idk just haven’t seen many like it. Plot was interesting, but it transitions a bit slow. I hate waiting weeks
Amazing story and plot. Nice vocab and word choosing so this has a loads of potential so keep up the good work because this is amazing!!!!!!
Not even joking it's the only story so far that I'm enjoying to read... Apart from solo levelling... but that's setting the bar pretty high. xD You're doing well though! Carry on