Wonderful story!The writing quality is still good. The stability of updates looks normal. But still, the story development needs improvement. There are a lot of things that needed to fix like grammar.The author is completely aware of his/her limit and she/he puts a lot of effort to establish a good storyline so far. I highly recommend to the editors to check this.
It was enjoyable and a good read until nationalism rears its ugly head. How come most modern novels from Qidian contains xenophobia and nationalism? And, the thing which boggles the mind is how unapologetic they are for being hard core china-numbah-wan-bully.Great translation and update stability. Very poor character design and world background.Shame with the xenophobia and nationalism.Dear COOK COMPASS, you can cook in my DROPPED section.
This is either a novel taken from the og author or a direct theft of the actual novel dragon kings son-in-law as that novel is also on this platform but they have this under a different name then the other novel
Very interesting, most especially the fight scenes. The mental picture created when reading is what makes it very interesting. Keep it up and I'm hoping to read more chapters in the subsequent months to come.
Writing quality: Tbh your writing quality is pretty good not too many errors but hey man nothing is perfectStability of update: I gotta give you 5 stars for that you posted 10 chaps 6 days ago and posted like 20 the past day I think?Story development: Well man what do you expect? So far each world he comes back from he lives a whole new life and only gets 10 soul power yes your logic is 1 to 10 is a average human but dang man first world lookism he became more famous then Eminem and a boxing champ maybe give him a little more? One other thing The fact that he has to keep doing these quests till he dies kinda sucks if he doesn't complete the quest he dies. Plus from so for there isn't really any real development mostly it's the same thing so far go do world mission come back with more soul power get smarter make more money boom next world and repeatCharacter design: How is he not messed up yet? He has lived multiple lives. Yes ik he has higher soul power but come on man he doesn't have the gamer mind or anything? He lived 89 years with the (love) of his life he cries and mourns for a little yes but then he comes back enjoys his youth and thinks about how is soul power can be like conjuror haki from one pieceWorld background: Uh nothing too new compared to canonThere you go my review plus hey author if you want a excuse to make your mc op with soul power make the next world mission bleach? Boom he will be very op when he comes. Back from there
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Can't say I'm impressed with the character given other abilities if already godlike. The power of Flight I'm rather content with, but the other powers were unnecessary...
the plot was good. but clearly the author writes to fill the daily word count ( i.e money) not for the quality the story doesn't even progress for hundreds of chapters. focusing on things that holds no relevance to the core story. really disappointing the author tries to focus so much in the explanation of cultivation that it becomes annoying at times. the cultivation levels are messy and all over the places
Man, I like how you didn't delete 1-star reviews....,....,..... ...........,............,......,.m... Mm...... M ...,....................
Hello, author here.First, I want to thank all of you for the support and the good feedbacks that you are giving me.I plan to write a long story and to review it bit by bit to correct any grammatical mistakes that I find.For now, you have my gratitude for sticking to my novel and I hope to keep seeing you all in the future.Have a nice day.
Hmm. The synopsis alone had got me.
Time to round off and end this story, otherwise author you will lose us as your readers to your future books. Please don’t dragggggg this book on and on, nothing wrong with a happy ending after 400 chapters