Grammar: 3 stars(Same as mine)Character design: At the beginning chapter there was not many character design.updating stability: Daily chapter is updated.World background: Only information about the surrounding area where Mc does his business is mentioned.Story development: In recent chapters, story development is going well.
In a word I would call this story unique.
This novel one is using the images from another work as its cover that work is known as VIRTUAL WORLD CLOSE COMBAT MAGE . This work is hosted by quidans partners Gravity Tales and will move to Quidans page and be exclusive here at the end of the current arc. Two the synopsis and work is a copy of the story CLOSE COMBAT MAGE which is the story pertrayed here. The original author of which is CLOUD SKY ( YUN TIAN KONG). If web novel doesn't wish to be involved in a potential costly lawsuit the should take this work down.
My initial review.You book has potential I won't say much until much later in the story as it progresses.Just to cheer you back in return...............................
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I expected much from this novel. Way too much.Although confusing during the first few chapters, it evolved wonderfully.The story line is pretty good with some decent twist and turns to keep you hooked. Until random powerful characters shows up out of nowhere to mess up what could have been a good climax. Once was tolerable, but this keeps happening now. It's like the author doesn't want anyone to die.What happens when you've read over two hundred fifty chapters and none of the major enemies (There's a LOT of them) don't die at all because they all of a sudden gets saved by stupidly random events. It gets boring quckly.Sigh. For the purpose of word count, the author decides to mess it all up. I hope it gets better. But for now, this is so anticlimactic.The current arc is so disappointing.
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very decent novel, it's not the exact same as other cultivation novels, but a few similarities, i hope that the author does make the character a bit more modern with retorts etc, but I Would say give it a read...while its free...
So far the book is very good little bit different from other books. I like it and will tell others to give it a try for me I will definitely recommend it.
update stability 1★could have enjoyed it...but author didn’t continue ?????????????????????????????????????
For me, this is one of the best entertainment novels out there. The writing quality is honestly top-notch every time I read a chapter. And doesn't have any generic tags like 'harem' in it, which is personally not my cup of tea.
I want to inform everyone that on December 31st, I will be rewriting the FIRST three Novels, ever wrote ad it will mark three years I have been on the platform and they will be available on Webnovel and Honeyfeed.