souvikjana
I am really disappointed in this novel. I thought it would be a cultivation one. But it isn't. If you are expecting alchemy, or that pill forging thing, theres nothing about it. I thought this story would be similar to Gourmet of another world, but .......
harem dont waste your time...I had no problem with the overall development until this: "Enemy of women? I'm the savior of all men and beautiful women, the nightmare for all ugly freaks and transvestites. I'll make sure that they wouldn't dare to come out and scare others!" ???????like, what the actual fuck bro, nah
it's not mentioned in the Synopsis but the MC want's a harem, that's the most important part of the novel i think 'seeing how the title is about the name of the skill'so if you are a person who likes novels about a system and also one that have a harem you can try this one.
I really like the story so far and I'm on chapter 33 I believe. the only knock I have is the inconsistent updates otherwise it's a beautifully written story thus far. If you are looking for something that is not complete hogwash and a Mary Sue MC give it a try. It is a beautiful story because it is subtle and simplistic yet very profound.
(Sorry for my English, but it's not my native language)In general it is a good novel, but there are several things that I do not like. I know it has a slow development, but it is too much. In other novels the MC would have already accepted that he is no longer in his world and that now he needs to learn a new common sense, instead of meddling in annoying matters. For this there would be a small event that would encourage him to improve, but in this novel he just takes it back, making the story heavier because it can feel repetitive. I mean, there were already several things that would have made a normal person seriously rethink whether with a normal mentality they could survive, but in this case the MC prefers to stay the same thinking that everything is going to change without him doing something. I can bear that at first he is a fearful crybaby, but that at this point he has not gotten angry one bit with the cause of everything is an idiot, honestly. I understand that he represses himself, but unless it is Gandhi, I do not understand why he does not have a bit of violent reactions to several important things and only worries about small things. These are all the complaints that I have managed to find so far, if I have more I will leave them in the comments.
This is a good story but I must ask what happen to keido and big mom bc it seem they died and if they are who will be the empire in the new world?
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all your book are very good but if you don't mind can you pls continue writing dual cultivation..
This is a cliche but intriguing story, wanna read the next chapter, please don't take too long to update. Aside from minor grammatical error, this story is well-planned and their dialogue is just awesome, specially Abbigayle's lines.
Love this book please update soon!
Loved this book. I am sad that it ended but also happy that it ended on a good note.. I always read the books which is complete. For the first time i waited for updates and all. But it was worth it. Thank you so much for this wonderful book. Waiting for your next book.. Keep it up.
I really enjoyed this book. kudos to you.
