Bro your book has high potential. Continue writing it and readers will run onto you hahaha. I like the revenge part, its the part that will ignites the fire in each readers emotion. Bro-san jia yo! Love your novel??
First watched the drama "the untamed
Thank you for this novel which is worth readingThis novel is an exciting novel, as it deals with the distinct personality of the hero outside the familiarWhereas, the character of the hero is a merciless and distant from the fictional good characterI hope it will last until the end
This book is so good that my thumbs are twitching from excitement to read the next chapters so I accidentally copy and pasted this over and over. This book is so good that my thumbs are twitching from excitement to read the next chapters so I accidentally copy and pasted this over and over. This book is so good that my thumbs are twitching from excitement to read the next chapters so I accidentally copy and pasted this over and over. This book is so good that my thumbs are twitching from excitement to read the next chapters so I accidentally copy and pasted this over and over.
i have read abt 15 chapters. So the review is based on this.The story development is pretty good. The way the historical system works is interesting. Currently, there's not much character development. We do not know any thing of the world background so far.The main thing i feel author needs to develop is good grammar. Its really difficult to enjoy the story without good grammar. I hope the author will work on it.
No offence to u author but read this and waited till i read all chapters b4 i came to any opinion and this is that ur story is crap the system was a waste the point behind a system even it isn't like the normal op system is to offer asistance all it did was talk do some increased healing and pump adrenaline then u tortured and killed a 2 yrs old off for some character development that didnt pull through and ur mc behave like a pussy in the face of death after dying 3 times whats the point of all that training if he aint gonna use it cause it clearly states he was strong enough to beat his father when he was goin all out and then there was making it seem like there person that could fight his father that was attacking them yep so in all crap.
This novel start with a good line. The starter stories is good. But this is still the beginning. Waiting 4 more elebotation about the situation in mc. I shall await more chapter. Good job author.
This is the shameless author review I saw everyone doing ?I don't really have anything to say other than I hope you guys enjoy reading this
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i like the story till now, it looks slightly fast but its okay but you have to slow it down a bit in the future.also im mad if that foxgirl dies ?doesnt matter if shes a demon or not. just "tame" her.
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