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That's a good story. On the current moment (Chapter 8) it's more developing the world background, but I'm anxious for what's next. On the moment, I just don't understand so good the bloodlines system. How they are chosen? Why two bloodlines for the Mc? For the concept of a game, it's don't make so much sense for the balance of the game. I want more development on this way on the future too.
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Good different cultivator story, however the author needs to find a editor as there is alot of grammar and spelling errors. It is a good story... please find an editor.
The author says this is a first attempt writing, but without that knowledge I never would have guessed. The language is rich and detailed with good pace and interesting characters. The MC actions at the beginning were upsetting (I very much feel for his wife), but he is not beyond redemption. Overall a very interesting read! Great work!
This seems like an interesting read so I decide to pick it up. I wasn't disappointed since many story have something cliche about them. But it has a good plot so I want to say keep up the good work????????????
Literally what the tag says, UNPRINCIPLED, the author is literally trying to make u hate the MC, he has ok interaction with his sister and the female classmate, however anyone else or anything else, he sees as weak or not worth it, he himself acknowledges that divine beasts are very rare, however when he sees other ppl with beasts less than saint rank he disdains them unnecessarily. Good story trope ruined by the character himself. He is intelligent don't get me wrong, but he behaves over-smart.
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Filled with grammatical errors. Probably MTL copy paste. Only updating stability is the good point of this novel.????????????????????????
I really like novels with systems. This novel is very good where the protagonist can do anything with the help of the system, and really like the protagonist to have lots of abilities and learn quickly ... I hope this novel can continue, and also if it can be released 1 - 2 chapters. thank you
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