This book is good. It has a good plot yet lacks many things. There needs to be less author notes in the middle of the story, it is rather annoying. Maybe also fix some grammatical mistakes. I’d advice grammerly. Try adding more of the setting so we can imagine where it is taking place. The character design is interesting keep it up. Overall it’s good, just needs polishing.
I really like it
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it's just trash which the writer made with another epic novel in mind but ended up making a piece of garbage which was reflected in the low rating due which he dropped it,the only right decision he made
dropped chapter 2 only because I found the very minor errors unbearable
I have read from machine translation websites and my mind can filter the mistakes out, for some reason I couldn't do it with this
first chapter decent start, found that his father is a blacksmith unbelievable due to it being a dying trade
wondering why he is cheerful finding mushrooms without explaining why he can differentiate the poisonous ones from the others
annoyed author had MC took a portable stove and not a flint striker for barbeque far more useful
annoyed MC took his phone but didn't take a solar power charger
to tell you the truth readers..
This is definitely not recommend novel because the writing quality Is so worse even me that has almost 4 years reading experience Chinese,Japanese, english novel i already experience it how terrible Chinese translation are...
This novel is worse than Chinese novel it seem 16 years old maybe or lower maybe write it and just quite new at english language.
And i hate quite story development because it was so fast as if the heaven helping him or lets just say in Chinese Novels "World Law" as if he was heaven child and i hate system too... because it came from the system power he was just like low exercise and get multiple ℅ strength i mean it came from system power and even knowledge why don't you just give him op knowledge like level 1 dont have knowledge suddenly have heaven defying knowledge because of unknow encounter even people didn't know ya know what i mean i will not explain anymore because it was wasting my knowledge even it can only last 24 chapter as if this is masterpiece but not really because of the writing quality
Reviews brought me here but the chapters are very little.........keep up the hard wirk auther san☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
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the story is really good
it has really good world building
the quality seems really high as well since there not many spelling errors
This book is really totally amazing and totally worth reading