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This reads very much like a screenplay. I'd like to see author expands and add more than actions and dialogues. Plot is intriguing and characters are interesting enough. The battle scene is exciting. Epic, I dare say. The story's got a huge potential. So, a bit more muscle on the bone, and this would rake in stars and readers.
The novel may not be for everyone as the comedy is funny for me but it may not be funny for others. This novel and the gaia novel so far seem the best
Dear God this is so low effort it hurtsFor starters the writing, while not overly terrible. It uses alot of wrong terms and sentences that simply dosent make any sense not sure if it's the translation or source materialThe story starts out with some pretty basic mmo stuff, which I honestly quite like. But It pretty quickly because a low effort circle jerk. Everyone gets a grade B and up talent, yet the Mc only seem to use it, while everyone else is utterly incompetent.The Mc dosent even try to make an effort to befriend the 2 known guild leaders when approached the first timeThe npcs are said to act like real people, but that's not the case in the actual writing. I've read alot of si fanfics which are miles ahead of this garbage. You could probably still enjoy it if you are tired enough. But to me this just hurts to readBest of luck
Pro: Good grammar, writing quality is very good compared to other novel’s on the site. Con: idot mc. He chooses not to Increase his stats using the system even after being nearly killed multiple times. Granted he does end up using them but he chose to remain weak for a very long time. I do understand having the mc be stupid, Naive, or weak but he has had multiple wake up calls and refuses to answer them. Pro: world design is very good. Especially with the way its shrouded in mystery and everything isnt given to you upfront like many novels on this siteCon: thus far side character development has sucked im beginning to wonder why they are even there. I digress im not fully caught up on chaps but thus far instead of caring about characters I either wish for their deaths, especially Erik, Or i’m just plain indefferent about their wellbeing.Pro: despite his shortcomings MC seems human which i really enjoy and some of his actions actually make sense which I really enjoyThese are my thoughts thus far and I do apologize if the spelling sucks WN turns of autocorrect on my phone.If anyone thinks in wrong about any of these feel free to reply
I could read until ch7 because When I saw the status screen again I just droped this.mc killed a fox and gain 2 level then killed 99 fox he only got 3 more levels I think this is wrong.
Hello, author, I left the novel in chapter 80 so that it accumulates chapters, then when I return to read, the name and the cover are changed. My question is, was any chapter modified? or can I continue in chapter 81?
I sincerely hope more novels like this one, without westernization..........................................................,................ ................. .......... .. ........ .....
This is the first cultivation based story I have read and I'm honestly surprised how well the cultivation system is set up. The story builds nicely to each climax or new level of power without using too much in the way of plot armor. The thoroughly explained pieces of the world are well defined but there is enough left to the imagination to feel imaginatively invested. Would recommend
I'll speak my honest opinion, the novel is very good and I've already added it to my collection, I'm a fan of the fantasy genre and I really like system tags. The world construction is very good and the plot is interesting, I hope the author stays firm with this novel.