'What if you can't find another way to help your mother?'
i read it on royal road finally its here .good story i recommended it to everyone who likes action and great plot140 chars 140 chars 140 chars
Despite the hope I had at the start, the story is poorly written. Moreover, it is full of problems : baseless arguments used to justify things in the plot. If the author had at least not talked about his arguments in every part of chapters, it would have been better. The idea behind the plot is great, but it is poorly used. On top of that, the English is bad.
Not my type of story. Well the biggest reason I don't like this novel is because till where I read 80% of the story wasn't even in the inn and i thought from the title that he is gonna at least spend 90% of his time as an innkeeper but it seems the author wants it to be more adventurous. The brain tumor also just feels more like a plot device to let the mc make more stupid decisions and get in different stupid scenarios which I don't really like. But don't take my review too seriously because everyone has different tastes so just because I didn't like it doesn't mean you won't like it so just give it a try and tell for yourself.
Even when the author is unwell she is always writing. She is that dedicated. Thank you so much author-sama. I for one appreciate it ??
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
I’m Definitely giving this book a Five Star,I was reading the chapter one but had to quickly come to rate it….I love this book so much,well…lemme continue reading hehe ??
The book is actually decent but the issue lies in the fact that there are no characters the mc is the only character there’s only so far a story can go with one person. everyone else is extremely shallow even his own brother isn’t exempt the lack of a female lead is also annoying and don’t say lunar is a female lead she’s a ducking AI there are other ppl who were introduced but never focused on like serah, Emma and Chloe assuming they were focused on more and possibly love interests along with his brother being focused the series would be ten times better but seeing how there’s no hint of this happening and the mc is focused on work instead spending time with his family or socializing he’s wasting his youth im gonna drop it but if it happens just tell me I’ll go read it. This review is till ch125
It's an amazing novel, but I unfortunately can not continue. The characters are intertaining to read, and the author seems to have thought out their personalities well. The world seems active (even without the mcs intervention), which is a good sign in terms of world development.The writing quality is ok. It's not the best, but it is readable. The grammer mistakes sometimes break immersion, but overall, it's readable.The updates aren't too bad, although personally, I would prefer faster releases, but I know that people have busy schedules and don't have the whole day to write their books.My problem stems from the mc and the reoccurring dominant females. The princess who seems to find the mc amusing for some reason, and gives the feeling that they are bonded in some way. The advisor to the King of the Golden Crow Kingdom, who the mc seems to have a soft spot (and view her as a source of peace for him), or at least seems will have a close relation to the mc one way or another(though I don't know how close). The part which made me dejected the most is when the mc (in a vulnerable state after battle with 2 former rank 8s) chooses (willingly) to go to the advisors hideout due to him feeling at peace in HER hideout. The mc seems to try and project loneliness, but his actions and thoughts seem to desire some form of companionship (either platonic or more intimate, I don't know). An example of this is during the inheritance at the beginning with the woman he had saved for his plans but grown fond of, where although he had already made countermeasures for the liklihood of betrayal (he killed her), he seemed hopeful that she wouldn't due to her perceived innocence (which he was incorrect to believe in it would seem).Don't get me wrong, the book is amazing, hence why I gave it a 4/5, but it just isn't my cup of tea. I expected a loner mc who either slowly descends into loneliness due to his ambition and goals (which he seems to lack, or have any drive in), or one who was always a loner, but I don't get the feeling this is how this book will turn out. So, in conclusion, this book is recommended for anyone looking for a ruthless mc, but not a loner in their path to the top.
Idk if this a spoiler or not but can you please in the future make Paula not blind plus this Is really good writing and character development recommend it!!!
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There is something to be said about this fanfic, and that is the undisputed fact that it reeks of potential.This story is a fresh take on the 'doulou dalu' fanfic in which the protagonist reincarnates as one of the side characters. The author's writing style is easy to follow and the grammar is well above its peers; although it could use a content editor, it's not for the lack of trying: as the story already reads as a final draft, the recommendation is just to add polish to a decent story up to this point.