now the invisible dragon is really awesome no one can fight him
Overall it's a mostly decent story.Interesting World building, some really intriguing concepts, and some really cool side characters.However the big weakness of this book is the MC: He starts as a whiny, overthinking, self pitying, and overall very negative person. Which normally wouldn't be a problem except for one little detail: the Author drags Character development out WAY too long.After 187 chapters, the Character development can be called "slightly there" at best, and despite several life altering events that *should* improve the Character in a positive direction to a larger degree considering how jarring they are, the MC barely changes.Now, I'm not really an advocate of MCs who have drastic changes of personality practically overnight, this author has swung the pendulum too far to the other end, given the start state of the character in my opinion.TLDR; the Book is Good but, MC personality is that of a garbage human being, and takes too long (in my opinion at least) to improve
Starts strong with a reasonable protagonist and setting. He’s not getting everything handed to him and he’s not a reckless fool. However, in the end of the second volume and the beginning of the third, i.e. around chapter 300, he starts getting everything. Even stuff he didn’t know he wanted. I’m ok with that every so often but for the next 100 chapters he becomes completely passive yet grows faster than ever. It seems to me the author couldn’t come up with a good reason for the protagonist to grow so they had to take away their autonomy to get anywhere. Not to mention the path they’re taking to get the power is completely different than anything before.Also the relatively reserved cautious protagonist suddenly joins an established group way to quickly. Suddenly becoming life and death friends in just a couple of days.
after all the beautiful synopsis about cultivation in mundane activity, turns out just another system. why all those cultivation extreme importan if there is system anyway?
He knew, he couldn't finish it in time. Maybe he could. Maybe he just didn't want to.
Hello, is this novel finished?? It’s one of my favorite novels and I’m wondering if there is more content to come or if the book ended? ???????? ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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It’s a good story and has a great development their are some parts that are quite different from the original story apart from Izuku having a quirk but all in all a great book and I hope it doesn’t stop
Wow, captivating, transports you to another world while still being relatable. Cannot stop reading???
Update:By far this is his best book ever and top 10 of all kingdom building on the platform the MC gains tragedy in the early chapters but it’s fine he comes back stronger then ever ?.World bulding - 9/10Characters- 10/10Everything else is a 10/10 aswell,The magic system is very good I love it and everything else about the novel it’s a must read if you make it past 20 chapters
No joke. This novel is so good The world building is amazing. The dungeon creating is amazing. 10/10
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