It looks promising, I like how it follows. It's well structured, the characters are interesting, and the setting looks cool. The quality isn't bad at all, considering that apparently this is your second work and you started it recently, so my assessment is that it's very good.
"What? I don't know what are you talking about magician." Doctor Jack staring at me with his creepy face.
Okay, it's time for school. I get up from my bed with happly.
'Huhhh? You can't agree with me and disagree at the same time! That's cheating!'
Sob
Since the party was exclusively only for the club members she had to seduce her way in through the back door. A little bit of money to the club monitor watching the door did a lot of help too. It's not like she was stranger to these kind of events so she was prepared for it beforehand. Her personality was quite dominant and strong already so she just had to wear a neat bloody red suit to add to her charm to blend in with the crowd.
Seriously not that kind study it's pretty much like demon study as you know Eina when she got teacher mode,
"Go get nude in your room, this is my study!"
As the world watched they noticed that they were not going to share the advances enjoyed. They were not fooled by the lotteries or the promises..
"Noooo no no don don don't sye goo bye!" Meykelic pleads as he picks me up and runs into the ship. He just kept repeating the sentence over and over in his broken human speech "Don't say goodbye." The last thing I saw were his desperate eyes, then I knew no more.
Grayfia terkejut dengan kekuatan Shiro dan dia merasa dia berada di depan Raja iblis sendiri.dia sampai berkeringan dingin dan ketakutan melihat Shiro dan di tidak menyangka Anak seumuran Shiro memilki kekuatan seperti raja iblis. tetapi sayangnya tekanan itu hanya di arahkan kepada dia sendiri dan tidak ada orang di dalam ruangan yang merasakannya.
The water's getting warm so you might as well swim