So far (40 chaps) its amazing..5 stars deserved..???????????????????????????????????????????????????
mc is a naive child with extremely low eq, he is like one of those idiotic emo wannabe villains, I personally didn't like his character ... the grammar was also bad ... But some people might like the mc who knows
Hello!
I know, I know, shameless self-review... but hey, anything else would only be hypocrisy on my part... why would anyone rate his own work as anything but close and dear to his heart?
Anyway, I wouldn't want to spoil too much but figured some of my planned thoughts (at the time of writing this, the novel has just been posted) would serve as a good indication if you would like to give the story a try, or mayhaps not. Both are fine, and while I would miss you, my dear potential reader, in case you would decide to abandon me, I would respect your decision.
At the very least, please give me the courtesy of telling me the reason, so I could continue to drive myself forward and improve! Writing is not just my passion, but currently, in these dark times, my only solace!
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When you check in for the first few chapters, you might grow confused and ask yourself: "Is this really a modern day, urban fantasy story? Why are we starting from the prehistoric era then? What is going on?
Relax, my dear potential friend, there is nothing wrong! The first few chapters, serving as a sort of first mini-arc, will be playing out in the far past, showing an initial journey of self-growth and introduction to Aziel as an individual.
I do not plan to push it for too long, but there are a few interesting ideas that were never explored in these novels, and I had this itch...
As for the rest, this novel being a genuine submission for WPC #238 you may have an idea of where we are going. If not, or if you are reading this far in the future (...how's it there by the way? Is this stupid pandemic still raging on?), then allow me to copy the contest details here, as it would speak more without spoiling anything.
"Male Lead - Strong Acting Weak
Don't judge a book by its cover. Someone who seems weak and pathetic might just turn out to be an almighty person concealing his overwhelming strength."
The story is good. Other people should appreciate this more. It's a slowpace so kinda get boring sometimes. But overall everything's good so keep the good work going author.
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author died of covid19
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Interesting start, very well done! Can't wait to read more chapters, keep up the very good work and all the very best for WSA 2022 hope you do well :)
What an intriguing tale, can't wait to see more updates from you, this is was a well-written book from the writing quality to the character design everything is in perfect shape, Like I said can't wait to read more[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Nice Book Name, Nice Book Cover.
Great plot, nice character. Everything about the book is good except for one thing. Your grammar! the poor grammar usage will make your book lose its potential. If you find it hard, use Grammarly. It'll help you a lot, another piece of advice, read books, don't just focus on writing, read more so you will have to compare their writing skills to yours, that way you'll know where you are lacking behind and then correct yourself.
Good luck with your writing.
can anyone send raw chapter link ......................................................................................................................
horrible grammar just so bad it makes me hate this novel despite the good premise. jsjsjskemtlglskqktkgjdjakjanrnbufizkwnbehrjdnwndndndnddkkd