5 star because of the Awesome Cover! Never seen something like that before!
5 star because of the Awesome Cover! Never seen something like that before!
5 star because of the Awesome Cover! Never seen something like that before!
5 star because of the Awesome Cover! Never seen something like that before!
5 star because of the Awesome Cover! Never seen something like that before!
Today's chapter is better the then the last one in my opinion, well I liked the forbidden fruit part mostly. Yuan was excited from the excitement that his fantasy will nw became a reality
I really enjoyed this story so far, i really recommend this story for reading.
Well when I first started reading this I was like it's another magic novel but as a I read further ahead the novel became amazing the world background is explained clearly I do like the character's in this story the translation quality is excellent to me (I don't nickpick) the only thing I want for this novel is more releases more more and more can't get enough of this book
Well...I don't know what to say other than this story is a grammatical nightmare. It's just...sigh. The premise is beautiful and I guess you can ignore the errors if you like it enough but...well. You really should work on your pronouns in particular. Just to clarify, for a woman is used /she/ and for a male /he/. Always. No exchange between the two can occour. Not only that, you also fill the chapters with unneeded info, throwing up facts left and right, making it a boring read. Is the reason why I only gave you 3 stars for world background. It's not that you did not develop it, it's just that...you didn't really fit it very well in the story. You should try to integrate your info more with the flow of the story, revealing smaller bits in more points. There is no need to dump everything on the readers at once, it only stops the flow and few people will read those added parts anyway (like i did) which is a pity.
Aside from those points it's a beautiful story, I liked it. You probably should just think more about editing your chapters rather than postin them quicker, really.
Anyway, I hope I didn't offend you with my comments and that instead they could be of some help to improve your writing style.
Really ingenious novel. It takes you on a trip to another universe, very well designed and full of secrets that I hope will be all revealed in the future. My curiosity got the best of me, so I'll go read it in portuguese.
Currently at chapter 35 and so far it didn’t disappoint me. Yea during the 1st 10 chapters the writing will turn you off( I gave up on this novel 6x b4 Ifinnaly decided to get past the second chapter) but it somewhat gets better,the Author said he’d rewrite the 1st few chaps so……
Okay, people!!! after writing a quite long prologue, we finally come into the main story where we will flesh out the leveling progress of the MC for this story which is Ragna Orion Miraikuru Kent.
I'm sorry if you all thought that Ragna Orion Mamoru Kent or Ragna 12 will be the MC before since he was the first character that has been introduced but sadly his role in this Novel is to become a Mentor to his Current Timeline Self, Ragna Orion Miraikuru Kent.
Thanks for reading, and I'm very sorry for the confusion you might think about the story.
ok I did read few chapters thinking the mistakes author mentioned would be just a few but sorry... the mc is beyond brain dead.I like abilities, skills even though they are not mentioned properly but I can't imagine an old man with great knowledge having that mentality.well I won't even say it's a great novcuz if you came here thinking it's a novel similar to immortal in the magic world than your dead wrong.the system is already kinda no for me anyways if you like a childish mc go for it
well a good novel with an intersting approach of fantasy powers the background of the mc is mind blowing i already read story with a similar problem for the mc but this one is introduced in a way that make the readers think that the mc might not survive for long overall a good story
WHY IS THIS NOVEL GO UNNOTICED THO?? I THINK THIS NOVEL IS ACTUALLY THE CUP OF TEA TO MANY PEOPLE!! HEY YOU, YES YOU THE ONE READING THIS! GO READ THIS NOVEL!!
Shitty novel build up... Thought it was good... But Mc is damned hypocrite...and an idiot to the bone... never reading...
For all those out there... This horrible... After 40 Chapters ... The mc has no regard for common sense.... and is a fucking idiot...
Do not read... or u will get annoyed too... Bcoz this thing had potential...until the mc became ****ty and hypocrite *****...