Great story. I have fall in love with the character ♥️
The story is super ??? fantastic keep it up
It was 33 chapters of straight yapping. It feels like the story hasn’t even started… you are stretching this what was written in those 33 chaps could of easily been written in 7-8. By the time we get to even start reading “the start” of this story we are going have to pay for it
An enjoyable fantasy novel that immerses the reader in a world full of adventure and mystery. The author’s writing style is captivating, and the storyline flows smoothly with exciting twists. The characters are well-developed, and the plot is tightly woven. A great read for fans of the fantasy genre.
I’m loving what little I’ve read so far! I’m adding to my library.
The story isin a complex and gritty world. The writing is detailed and insightful. I believe some parts could be clearer and easier to follow thoughThe dialogue is strong, with characters feeling realistic and unique. The way they react to the challenges around them helps the reader understand their personalities and struggles. The pacing is mostly solid, but a few scenes are dragged a LOT. And although the world-building is rich it gets a little overwhelming with all the details, makiug it hard to keep track of everything.It could be a bit more streamlined, but overall, it’s an engaging story with strong potential.
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is this amazing or what?so much potential and very immersive...I love it
I recommend reading this novel.it's great.
based on the free chapters I read it it is a good novel
it's me Victory Stoneworthy, and I'm telling you right now, this story is great
This book lacks some realism like the MC’s last life she was betrayed by someone close to her and almost died but when she got a second chance she was so trusting to people she met for a few hours? Usually their is trauma from being betrayed by someone you trust! Also when the team of four people were training they never met a monster at all? How is that realistic when the whole city is supposed to be crowded with them? Also they explain the training again the second time like they never did it the day before? Like she had to personally teach them again but shouldn’t they know from what they previously trained in? It just seems so unreal and fantasy with some plot holes here and there. And the characters don’t seem all that fleshed out and is just there to be in that role without any extra feelings! I also didn’t see MC train much because she was helping them so how is she going to improve when she is still in her younger body without any of her reflexes, muscle memory, or even instincts? I mean they trained for a whole week and ran for an hour to the designated area for training but never met a monster does that make sense?