The MC should absorb a skill that could enhance his IQ so that he could efficiently and effectively utilize his multiple skills. It's like an idiot who owns every weapons in the world but only knows how to use his fist.
Dunno how i got so far. Anyway
1st few chapter wallbreaking is ultra retarded - RETARDED
The system apparently has a lot of options and they are only visible when MC DECIDES TO ENABLE THEM, and he only does so when he feels like or "he remembered"... As story progresses he keeps enabling more options that display rank and some other shit. why not enable everything? - pretty retarded
MC is hunting sticks nonstop. All of a sudden 2 sticks appear, guess what MC does? HE SPEAKS TO THEM "Who are you?" LIKE WTF? DUDE u have been hunting sticks nonstop for so long and all of a sudden YOU FUCKIGN randomly decide to talk to them? (Reason he talked was because of the plot, he obv needed to talk to them...) - Retarded
MC has like 10-20 skills. Right before "dying" HE REMEMBERED he had an OP skill that transforms all dmg taken to 1 hp. Yeah... he just remembered at the crucial time, and guess what, all the other skills were explained, but when this1 was mentioned, we never got to see what it does, and behold a couple of chapters later, HE REMEMBERS it and uses it in a crucial moment and readers go "WOOW, HE HAD SUCH A SKILL" well done author, that was retarded suspense. - RETARDED
MC sees an S grade (that should have -500 ish hp, but apparently still had a couple of hp somehow left) stick being killed by a stronger stick and he goes "w-w-w-who are you?" ... - RETARDED
MC meet Hiersomething, 10 minutes later blabs his secrets to her, how he is reincarnated etc - RETARDED
When MC decides to blabber his secret about being blessed by the goddess, mc asks the question back and then MC SAYS- "Lets say our answers at the same time" LIKE FUCKING little kids, god i cringed so hard while reading that.
MC has major brain problems, constantly forgetting stuff, making irrational choices. The goddess brainfucking and changing things however she likes doesn't help the plot or the MC, he is retarded and stays retarded for as long as i have read - RETARDED
MC fights in a trial, 1st trial-10 rounds, half the them finished in one shot, the other half is explained as them all attacking using this and that, MC dodges! Use abilities and beats them. blah blah blah. 1st trial finished in 4 HOURS! 4 HOURS? THAT was maximum 30min. Apparently somewhere it was explained that sticks fight at a slower pace, but when the fights happen u CANT fucking tell that, fights are explained as all enemies can attack MC at the same time which means they are close or can move closer fast. anyway, it took 4hours apparently, insanity. -RETARDED
INHERITANCE obtained, MC has a full room of skills to BROWSE THROUGH, what does he do? takes the 2 skills he was there for originally and HE EXITS THE INHERITANCE and goes with the leader back to the alliance. EVEN THOUGH THERE WERE WHO KNOWS HOW MANY GOOD SKILLS. AAAND DOESN'T GO back there for a LONG time, and when he DOES, its again to LOOK FOR SPECIFIC SKILLS, he doesnt fucking look at all the skills and think if they are usefull, HE DOESNT even pick the passive skills that he shouldnt even worry about -RETARDED
From now on i guess spoiler warning?
MC gets a skill fusion option from his system. STILL DOESNT GO TO INHERITANCE TO LEARN ALL THE SKILLS AND FUSE AND FUSE THEM FOR OP RESULTS. - RETARDED
Oh right MC makes a clone. Makes it look like his old life... (yeah, he made him look the same as how he was instead of making him more handsome, or ANYTHING. EXCEPT. He increased his "drill" size. . . Yeah, author called his dick a drill and some other retarded name, my brain thankfully decided to erase at least 1 of them from my brain... But yeah, gotta increase dicks size but the rest stays the same. I mean how fucking boring is that, when u get a new life why tf would u want to look the same as you did., then again compared to all the other shit this is more just in my opinion.
The big fight against the wolf stick. Oh god, it was written so badly, so cringe. the tactics so cringe, i couldn't bear to read them so i was skipping and skimming chapters.
Dropped it at the point MC was showing off his awesomeness to EVERYONE around, yeah that's supposed to be the "climax", but to me it was just retarded because of the way that everything led to him needing to show off or the alliance gets destroyed...
Oh right, shitton of chapters about goddess and some random mages POV too, for now 170ish chapters they got almost nothing to do with MC. Just the goddess apparently influencing the retarded MC do things she wants him to do, yeah making MC even more retarded.
Conclusion? Retarded novel. Did i still read it like a sucker? Yea i did.
If you don't care about logic, or having a not Retarded mc whose brain is also getting ****ed by a goddess to make him even more retarded, then you might be able to enjoy this (reincarnation, system, op, prior knowledge to secrets).
I love this novel. but it's getting really low paced lately pace it up a little plz. Also the story update timing is too small so plz at least provide a chapter every two days.
Amazing story. Only bad part is the grammar.This takes a more rational and logical aproach compared to other “coming of age/hollywood” stories.Mc is smart and funny.The female leads have important roles in the story as well as complex personalities.I recommend you give this a try.
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This is a real gem here . The readers feels the emotional devloment of the mc and even in the first few chapters it really hits diffrent ..................
So far i can tell this book will be a gem and i cant wait for more chapters that will appear in future. Keep up the good work Zhayne ??????
Your quality of writing and story development are magnificent, congratulations. The world background was also well crafted and masterfully developed.
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I dropped this novel when he starts drolling over the women because of their heavenly beauty. It's not my cup of tea.if you are okay with MC getting hypnotised by beauty of every women around him, than this novel is for you.
Amazing book, at the start it felt a bit rushed and I felt like it was a copy of RSSG (Reincarnation of the strongest sword god), but after about 40 chapters it gets so so so good!! Soo much better book than RSSG. Readers and fans of VRMMORPG's and RSSG type books will definitely LOVE this book. I've been reading Web Novels for over 4 years now and have read over 40 WN's I can wholeheartedly say this is my #1 book!!
The Dao of Misunderstanding is well illustrated. Nothing about Dual Cultivation for 36 chapters. It's more about understanding and acceptance. There is a lot of drama from their past. Still going well for now. I understand the story better by seeing future developments.