Good novel so far. I hope the author does not change his line of reasoning during the course of the novel. In addition, for those who like a villain novel and an MC in this style, it is a great choice.
Concept of story is very good.But, the author don't know how to create scenario in the story. Most of the story was cliche and vey boring. The day after he gets system he becomes extremely arrogant that he puts no one in the eye. What can he do if someone hurts his family and starts to slow down his business. For finding 7th rank pet they lost another 7th rank pet, and they still obediently listened to MC and gone to go deep in the fracture space to search. Are they dumb or what. What if peak 9th Rank pet comes this time.
Translator removed all sex scenes from the original novel. where there used to be 2 or 3 paragraphs of intimacy, the translator replaces those paragraphs with ‘then they were intimate for the rest of the night’. disappointed but the story is excellent nonetheless. considering the only job of the translator is to translate, it would be 5 stars if he didn’t removed the r-18 scenes
It is a very beautiful prehistoric novel. The world background is well designed. It has mixed a little reality and a little fantasy. There is no problem with the personality of the main character. The plot is not repetitive or cliché. It is very subjective. in short, this is a great novel .....
Starting is great but after that chapters size started to get small and in last few chapters author is doing lot of forced plots which has changed the story and made the MC a big idiot..
This is genuinely an amazing story. It’s not your typical xianxia sort of thing. Brilliant quality original work. You can tell while reading that it’s trying to break through some of the weaknesses of 98% of cultivation novels. There is legitimate romance that isn’t some ‘they married and did stuff and now we kick out the girl from the story’ ****. It’s brilliant character development for most characters present in the story. Has some extremely minor downsides: author occasionally forgets to actually type out a word that he thinks of (very minor and doesn’t affect your reading much so I kept a 5 star for writing quality); in terms of stability, he of course hasn’t updated in 7 months but I’d rather give him the 5 stars than the 4.
Not read this on here but another site. I love these sorts It is mainly focused on business which is great, The other aspects of MCs life are decent and show depth Downsides to this I have a few1 MC was married but within weeks of rebirth desided to peruse romantically someone he didn't remember growing up with, I find this very weak 2 MC not only prevents the one he Perseus from makeing friends with guys but rapes her (she said no but he ****ed her multiplying times that is rape)3 MC loses backbone when it comes to drinking with Russian, if he doesn't want to drink just say no and not say if it's ok not to 4 after getting drunk he rapes a CHILD ( person was underage, and said she tried to leave but he wouldn't let her)5 even though I. Relationship MC thinks it's smart to hookup with wife from past life 6 MC continues relationship with child7 it is translated from Chinese who knows what other **** ups the original pedo author had MC doImprovements1Have had MC Persue wife after rebirth instead of fucking about2 have MC have backbone3 no child fucking (part where he helped her first time was fine)
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It's a copy of Lord of mysteries, but author used RPG class system fused with mystic. It's original and interesting idea. The problem is author is not doing it properly, it don't feel like 1world it feels like 2world fused forcefully. The so called mystery in this novel don't feel like mystery, its more like author is throwing a lot of unknown characters at the reader and then solve them one by one(and the concept of numbered artifact is 100% copy of LoM). So I would call it confusing characters rather than mystery plot. I hope author don't take it wrong way. I like it! But I just wish it could be better so I can love it.(I hope novel with perfect fusion of RPG and Mystic of LoM happens sooner or later).
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