I have absolutely nothing but garbage experience with Japanese novels, for the most part. Anyone reading this know if it's any different?
Examples: A harem magically forms around the main character, he's absolutely dogshit useless but for some reason is worshipped, powers seeming pop out of thin air for the main character.
Thank you for the recommendation, the description of this novel was intriguing but I've read a lot of comments that it isn't worth reading this is sad.
There is no system. It’s just the world informing him to f*ck off probably not realizing the bug
The system is basically a deus ex machina that the author can bullshit into the atory.
It was rush in the end, could have been better. 6/10. Great read though.
i wanna be as good as the guy who's writing this
that's it, that's the review
and now i'll proceed to keep writing so I can post the review
awful novel. MC gets spells but never uses them after he freeze his training room. he gets a Mana technique 7 star then only uses it once, then never uses it, he's a dragon but somehow gets phoenix bloodline cause plot. he basically becomes a slave cause "its important to the plot". i would go on but if you wanna read it and find out have fun
So here I was enjoying this book when all of a sudden the author ended it on the most annoying cliffhanger ever! However it is a good read so I encourage people to read it and bully author-Chan to hurry up and write more. For the readers sanity.....(and author-chans safety). Before he gets kidnapped and forced to write more
This is more like an 'inspired' novel from⁷ "Birth Of the Demonic Sword" from the dragon fight to the guards teaching him, all of it. Being inspired by a novel and making your own base on that is completely fine, but getting completely influenced is also bad. Your novel just feels like another iteration of "BoDS" it's insane how similar it is. Just from reading this i already know you're a big fan of "BoDS" This is more like a fanfic than anything. Sorry but except for Writing Quality and Updating Stability, I'll give the others a one star. I hope you can carve your own mold someday.
The story is very good to me and I enjoyed it but I hope that the story will be released soon so that there can be more chapters to read.
UDPATE SO SLOW .. WRITE FASTER..ABANDON YOUR OTHER BOOK CUZ THEY ARENT GOOD . THIS NEW BOOK OF YOURS IS A GEM SO DONT WASTE TIME FOCUSING ON OTHER BOOKS
Although the sudden marriage, getting pregnant and separation is a bit cliche, I’m still interested in this story. I want to know how the twins ended up separated (I’m assuming they were) and ended up with each parent. I also like that the FL doesn’t seem to be a pushover. Hope this gets picked.