this story is interesting and lovely I love
Tokoh utamanya sungguh menarik tidak naif tapi buat sedikit dramalah thor
hey when are you updating new chapters of memorial of returnees?
Mandatory 5-star self-review. I'm confident in the quality of my writing and guarantee you its consistency throughout the book.If you like grim worlds with a dark fantasy feel, unfathomable Lovecraftian horrors, and the threat of madness at every corner, this is the story for you. As I have noted, the beginning will be slow but not uninteresting. The protagonist is highly intelligent, manipulative, and cunning but not overly ruthless nor a murder hobo. His first taste of power will come relatively late, but it will be sweet, and worth it after all the hurdles he will have faced.If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask. Also, don't forget to vote and leave a review. It greatly motivates me to continue writing!
(Stoped reading after chapter 60) The book is boring, the author tries to make the Mc super edgy, the type that is like 'I am too lazy to deal with this because I lost someone I love' The Auther tries to add drama and dramatic reveals but he fails horribly it just becomes boring best example (spoiler) The mc learns that his sister the one he was being a edge lord about was there with him but without her memories, then his system tries to kill him because she was jealous and then it is revealed that mc has people living in his head, (This happens in the span of a chapter) Then there is the grammar, well let's just say thet it can be seen that the author is not a native english speaker and those mistakes kill my motivation to continue with the story.The author is Indian so the story has a lot of references to indian culture and religion. This does not bother me, but I would like to note it.Summery: The Mc is a depressed 'boo hoo'. I lost someone, and I know it was not my fault, but I still blame myself, and now i am haunted by her ghost and hear her voice in my head. [Highy unlikeable]The plot is all over the place.[It makes it seem that the author had no vision for the story, so he just wrote randomly]Random Drama that serves no purpose.[ Full of loop holes]Random Lore Drops [some chapters are some lore] ( I paid real money for a chapter, and it was just unimportant lore)2/5 Would not recommend the only reason it is not a 1 is because the world building is mildy interesting and the writing is not 'Young Master Chen: Courting Death' Terrible.
Shameless author dropping a 5-star review here! This is my first time ever writing, so I hope this isn't too bad. English isn't my native language so do tell me if you find any errors!And I appreciate it, if you guys could leave an honest review! I hope you guys enjoy this, and that I am able to make your day a tiny bit better, thanks!
The story has potential, though the author obviously has barely any knowledge on formula racing. First of all, how is he racing without an FIA license. Second is he's basically a pushover. Then he goes breaking laws of physics with magical overtakes against vehicles almost twice as fast as his s*itbox.The list goes on and on with inconsistencies.
Absolute dog shite of a novel story line makes no sense absolute gibberish writing with no consistency in the plot feels as though I'm reading about someone's imaginary thoughts skipping the details and instead bulletpointing the events makes no sense and glad that this gotshite novel is free still feel scammed by the time I wasted reading this but atleast I didn't waste any money on it
This is a good story, it is well-paced with mysteries that leave the reader asking. However, the character design and world background need a little more work. The story development became better the more you read so it looks good so far. Keep on writing
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She began to grin noticing a slight struggle. Zalaria leaned in close inches away from his lips.
Lu Zhanbei did not change his expression. His eyes flashed a hint of a smile. It was difficult to get close to him when he was so superior.