could have became my best novel .author could have not wasted that much chapters for some side story that i felt bored .after this beast horde part somehow make mc go to different country where he can grow fast atleast faster than in current country he lives in
I only read up to chapter 11.In my opinion this novel have potential, not bad.But i don't like the story because author use 3rd person perspective, just try to count how many times author write "Evan" in a single chapter, personally i don't feel connected to the story because of this.Also i feel like author need to use more punctuation, i notice author rarely use coma (,) sign on his story which made the paragraf feel chaotic.I also don't like how author do chapter 1, the sacrifice part on chapter 1 is unnecessary for me, and its better if you put it in chapter 10.In my opinion you made chapter 2 to chapter 9 as a flashback is a bad choice.I mean why would you give readers an 8 chapter long flashback right from the start? its unnecessary, everyone can literally read chapter 1 and jump to chapter 10 immediately and can still understand the story.Its a bad start in my opinion.You should know that you need to make the story as interesting as possible on early chapter to make people stay and hyped for the next chapters, but here i am dropping on chapter 11 before even i know mc new power after the sacrifice.I hope my review can help you to get better.good luck author.
What is up with this MC? does he like getting tricked, lied to, pushed around, and threatened by women? every woman he meets, he just gives up everything...this is kind of pathetic. I don't understand why most MCs in these type of novels are like this...smh...
I really love all the stories of this author with their lovely moments among the leads, the relationship with family and their friends. Really recommend that you read all the stories and trust me you won't be disappointed ??
The MC isn't a hero he's a creep.
Yeah......I can't. Didn't develop an interest in this.Somethings are too outrageous for even "screw physics."Bye byeApologies, I have to bullsh*t a little more for the review to be accepted. LallalalalalalalalalalalalalaI think that ought to do it
Currently at chapter 31, the novel seems to be truly good. The school bits are great and even though I would like a bit more interaction between the characters Infully understand why there isn't.The teachers are great. As of right now with teachers such as professor Messen and Pompei just enough information is given to somewhat understand them while still having plenty of mystery and guessing.Thus far the combat is exciting but a true magical duel has yet to happen, lookong at how the story is progressing though it shouldn't be too far off.The pacing is probably the best part of the novelm Even though a bunch of new things keep getting introduced, nothing seems rushed. Everything seems to make sense as well.I hope at some point we will be able to see the Mortal world amd have some info on that front.Great job thus far author
Great story all very detailed in mini details is one of the most beautiful stories I have read on the science fiction genre and reflects everything. And I'd like to suggest putting some romance into the novel. Thanks a lot for this great story anyway !!!!
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mediocre, very cliché .... without tension the opponents are very bland and are also always weaker than the main character.......................................................................