The story seemed interesting until you read a few sentences. Don't know if English isn't the author's first language. But there are a lot of spelling mistakes, broken paragraphs or sentences, even chapters are painstakingly short, which doesn't even progress the story or add substance in some way. I'd recommend reading other works to see how they structure or outline their stories.
Holy crap this is good, so good that it keeps the end of my hair stand up. thanks for your hard and beautiful work besides i really like this novels ;can't wait to read more of this novel.... I should have had waited until there is more chapters..... I like it too much♥
The Book is aammaazziinng keep it up writer??????????????????????????????????????????????????
Overall I'm only reading this because I'm bored. The writing itself is passable however the story lacks depth (Description of the surroundings/world and the character himself) its literally Ayaan does that and this theres no background what so ever. Although I said the english is passable, would be nice to have the author or an editor to recheck the chapters and make it more smoothly. Only read 30 chapters so far, but it's a brainless read for me.
Seriously, this novel is outrageously good. The author clearly sets up the story and his characters, it introduces serious challenges that make the characters question their paths. In a way it is like "Way of Choices
Keep the novel up!! do not abandon this novel, DO NOT FORGET TO GIVER SS to this novels guys. Please keep a schedule on this novel.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hello Everyone! This is the author of this new novel. This has been a work that I have always wanted to write, but never dared to due to several reasons.1. I have pretty bad grammar and vocabulary (Sorry :P)2. I am a high school student and I do not have that much time to write new chapters everyday (However I do try my best!)3. I never really found a suitable platform to show my work on, but I finally found it on Webnovel :)I hope you guys like the novel as it was actually inspired from all my biology studying and the martial arts novels that I LOVEE to read. If you guys have any comments be sure to drop it below and I will try my best to adjust to it!
The story seems very realistic , it felt like really happened in front of my eyes , they way of narration is excellent.the author really touched people's heart ??
I love BL with modern world especially school life. I am really looking forward to this novel. I already love the main character. Best of luck to you!!!!!!!
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
The story progresses nicely. There were no perfect book(mine included). I've seen grammar mistakes and sometimes, there were no present punctuations and periods present. But like other authors, no one was perfect. I started like you in the past so keep it up and continue your work.Use Grammarly to edit your work and it's good to go!I hope you also review mine called Lumia: Other World.Happy reviewing!
Interesting story that i have found about farming, so far it have a fresh plot and settings. I love how the author portrays the characters especially the MC. I hope author can update more chapters daily probably 2 chapters or more.